[This is similar to a displaced fic don't read if you don't like] I awoke to the blaring of alarms and flashing of red lights to find myself changed and in one of the most powerful warships in the Milky way.
While I wasn't completely expecting Fem-Shep to just get off, I kinda knew it since you said "blue fox" is what that for you to write this, little rushed, but pretty good, look forward to reading more
A bit rushed in places, and would be better if we knew exactlty WHAT this particular Fem-Shep was, but otherwise, not too bad.
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Thanks for the feedback and I plan to have a second chapter up later today going into more detail about the MC.
While I wasn't completely expecting Fem-Shep to just get off, I kinda knew it since you said "blue fox" is what that for you to write this, little rushed, but pretty good, look forward to reading more
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Hope it comes out before dark, I'm going camping today.
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Thanks for the feedback and I hope you enjoyed it. Lots more planed.
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You're welcome bud and I look forward to both camp and the new chapter
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I'm hoping so too
Also enjoy your trip.
Great work keep it up
Hey mr. author. How do you blackout the content? driving me nuts how to figure it out
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Hey remember there is no rush, take ya time when you write