For future reference, I'm actually kind of curious if this "recap" style of story telling in the second chapter is more or less interesting compared to the first. Just as a note for future writings.
It wasn’t just Mystery Mint who felt a strong tie of friendship for the bacon-haired girl. Throughout all of Canterlot High School, Sunset had earned a reputation for being extremely open and friendly to all students, and it was common knowledge Sunset lived alone in a rather comfortable apartment. If any girls felt so inclined they knew they could drop by to hang or even have a sleepover. They didn’t even need to ask beforehand! Sunset always managed to find time for them. Quite a few of her peers had taken Sunset up on that over her years at the high school.
Question! Was Sunset had ever been a bully in this? The story clearly follows the canon, being that every EQG event did in fact happened. But it always confused me how Sunset could even keep her cock tame for three years, before Twilight gave her the pills.
I plan to write an origin story about Sunset's humble beginnings into the world of Somnophilia, but since masturbating doesn't work on her cock, eventually everyone will know she's a bully, so how could she get girls come over anymore? And I originally thought that by using the magic pills was the first time Sunset committed somnophilia.
When I do the origin story, I want to keep in line with continuity, but now things are going to be a bit difficult..... Or I could say screw it and stick with my original plan.
For future reference, I'm actually kind of curious if this "recap" style of story telling in the second chapter is more or less interesting compared to the first. Just as a note for future writings.
this is good, but what of Changeling Domination?
If the sleep sex is rape, this story should probably have the non-con tag.
Otherwise (that is, without rape) the story would better interest me.
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Yes..it is I'm ashamed to say Also well done son!
fuuuuuuuuck this is creepy.
Love it
Part of me hopes shes wrong about not being able to get anyone pregnant
Please tell me they have at it with each other before the story ends.
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Need more
I wish their were more detail to the sex scene when sunset fuck twilight, still a gret story though.
Question! Was Sunset had ever been a bully in this? The story clearly follows the canon, being that every EQG event did in fact happened. But it always confused me how Sunset could even keep her cock tame for three years, before Twilight gave her the pills.
I plan to write an origin story about Sunset's humble beginnings into the world of Somnophilia, but since masturbating doesn't work on her cock, eventually everyone will know she's a bully, so how could she get girls come over anymore? And I originally thought that by using the magic pills was the first time Sunset committed somnophilia.
When I do the origin story, I want to keep in line with continuity, but now things are going to be a bit difficult..... Or I could say screw it and stick with my original plan.