To be completely honest, I've been sitting on this chapter for a while and kinda lost steam on it as I've been tending to do on conclusion chapters. Originally it was supposed to be more detailed, with Adagio finding Diamond's line of thinking a bit off... but also finding it weird how it kept working. Also wanted to delve a bit into revealing all of the hidden cam footage the group had planted everywhere.
My Princess Twilight Sparkle is the Tantabus theory was full proof. I gathered so much evidence that was presented in past chapters as well as the Tantabus true origin story, but you're telling me it was a real creature this entire time.........Then what the hell was the Tantabus Luna created? A fake!
First you shot my fail safe theory down in coldblood but with this one you just rip its arm off, stab it with its own arm, and watch it desentergrate.
I was so sure I was right, it made so much sense, but I was dead wrong. (sigh) Oh well! At least I’m finally free of that mystery plaguing my mind. So its all good.
And seeing that the story is still incomplete. What's next for our horny heroes.
They keep getting stronger and stronger as they evolve more and more. I mean dang, seeing Sunset actually showing off her dick to her prey like that was something I didn't see coming and I freaking love it.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Great now I gotta come up with a bonus story for Boysenberry and the other girls. I already got a list of over 20 I prepared beforehand. But the more the merrier.
11117675 I'd say instead of trying to jam pack all of that stuff into one chapter you could separate it out into different chapters as a slow burn so that people get hooked on it
None of this was to say Diamond Tiara had abandoned her newfound philosophy, of course. No, she was even more sure of it than ever! In fact, the lack of her proper reward only made her more ravenous to dig deeper into Sunset’s club in pursuit of it. Girls like her were just animals, the weaker sex, bred to be mere enticing prey for the predators that hunted them…
Diamond Tiara shivered slightly as she scanned her school’s hall with her newly acquired enlightenment. It actually made her a tad angry, seeing all of her fellow classmates clueless to their proper place. Girls like her, dressed like they had been told, in concealing modest clothing, never once knowing the thrill of being hunted and pursued by their betters. Not to mention the boys, taught to politely live amongst their prey as supposed equals, told not to act upon their ‘immoral’ sexual urges they all held towards the attractive meat surrounding them each day. It was cruel physiological torture that went against nature itself!
Off to the side, an entire pile of bodies was seen!!! A full stack of naked flesh consisting of her fellow female classmates! The ones on the top, many of their faces, and bodies too, were quickly familiar to her. Toola Roola, Coconut Cream, Petunia Paleo, Silver Spoon?! The very girls who had attended that fateful night at the mansion with her!
Quick question. Did they grab every girl from the party and only the four mentioned are the ones whose faces Boysenberry could see?
I want to get all the details for when I write this difficult chapter.
To be completely honest, I've been sitting on this chapter for a while and kinda lost steam on it as I've been tending to do on conclusion chapters. Originally it was supposed to be more detailed, with Adagio finding Diamond's line of thinking a bit off... but also finding it weird how it kept working. Also wanted to delve a bit into revealing all of the hidden cam footage the group had planted everywhere.
Well I guess it wasn’t the power of belief or twilight, all well you win some you lose some.
nice work![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
The Tantabus was real the whole time....................
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................Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You have gotta be freaking KIDDING ME!!!!!!
My Princess Twilight Sparkle is the Tantabus theory was full proof. I gathered so much evidence that was presented in past chapters as well as the Tantabus true origin story, but you're telling me it was a real creature this entire time.........Then what the hell was the Tantabus Luna created? A fake!
First you shot my fail safe theory down in coldblood but with this one you just rip its arm off, stab it with its own arm, and watch it desentergrate.
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I was so sure I was right, it made so much sense, but I was dead wrong. (sigh) Oh well! At least I’m finally free of that mystery plaguing my mind. So its all good.
And seeing that the story is still incomplete. What's next for our horny heroes.
They keep getting stronger and stronger as they evolve more and more. I mean dang, seeing Sunset actually showing off her dick to her prey like that was something I didn't see coming and I freaking love it.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Great now I gotta come up with a bonus story for Boysenberry and the other girls. I already got a list of over 20 I prepared beforehand. But the more the merrier.
Keep up the good work![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
11117769![:ajbemused:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajbemused.png)
Tell me about it
11117675
I'd say instead of trying to jam pack all of that stuff into one chapter you could separate it out into different chapters as a slow burn so that people get hooked on it
11117675
God I wish you would do a sequel
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The problem with that is I don't exactly have the motivation to write that much, seeing how long this one took to come out.
Diamond Tiara, victimhood chuunibyou.
Can't wait to read the next one. It's been a pleasure watching this story evolve.
Quick question. Did they grab every girl from the party and only the four mentioned are the ones whose faces Boysenberry could see?
I want to get all the details for when I write this difficult chapter.
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Pretty much everyone. But you can go nuts with whatever details you want to happen in your own story.