To be honest, I kind of lost my vision for this one for a while and just barely managed to crack out a sorta rushed ending if that isn't obvious enough. I feel like I enjoy writing the actual stripping and talking scenes rather than just the sex.
Anyways, just for fun, here are some potential ideas I came up for as future chapters. I don't think I'll ever get to writing them though, so I'm posting them here:
-The group catches wind that the newly wed Shining Armor, and their principal Cadance are attempting to conceive their first child. They do what they do best and see if they can if they can knock up their principal while she's out, and have her believe the child is her husband's. Kinda seems like they are taking things to far though.
-CHS and Crystal Prep attend Camp Everfree together. Turns out CHS has a similar group of guys who are into fucking their sleeping classmates. Really makes you think who isn't in on this... Anyways, Sunset and her new allies from both schools now perfect a better gas-based method to knock out people out. Then they enjoy literally every girl at their two schools who they want to piece of. Includes a heart warming segment of brotherly bonding as Thunderlane teaches Rumble how to fuck the three sleeping members of the CMC.
-Adagio regains some of her powers due to her close relationship with Sunset and gets the ability to control the minds of their prey. Seemed like fun to be taking the same advantage over the victims, but having them conscious enough to fuck back... though it probably ventured outside the scope of this story's main kink.
-A twist chapter that reveals a good number of female students are also into drugging guys asleep and riding their dicks. The two sides eventually discover each other and realize they are being stupid and everyone just wants to have sex... which they then have.
I like the last two. The power regain could be played out perfectly if she uses her power to fuck them while they're awake and make them forget. Or just have the girls block them out of thier kinds so our futa duo can blow away at them as if they're invisible.
For a minute thier I thought the girls were gonna start getting suspicious of sunset and start investigating on why so many of them are always sore after sleeping over at sunsets.
It would make a good non canon what if story, how both CHS and CP female students some how learned of each other similar situation, and start investigating, and even plant camreas in Sunsets house and catch her in the act, thus forcing Sunset to reveal and show everything to all her victims, the only questions are will the girls seek vengeance or let fun continue.
10303932 That Camp Everfree idea would make for a GREAT one-off sequel if you ever wanted to do that. I actually really like how you make this into a business type thing. It’s like Pulp Fiction and Reservoir Dogs and how they treat crime all business-like.
(XXX)XXX-XXXX: Btw, Fluttershy did ask for your number. Expect a call from her later, lover boy.
Okay... question here. For the sake of this story, the idea that works makes at least a semblance of sense. However, does Fluttershy even know the dude before all this? I don’t think a smell thing would work if she never consciously smelled him before.
I did actually try starting that story but I abandoned it because I didn't exactly know what I wanted to do at the time. I had two ideas.
The first was to take sex moments that were mentioned but we didn't really get to see and build a detailed sex scene around them. I would go through every girl that was mentioned that didn't have a strong sex scene; like fleur being carried to the bathroom by Adagio so she can fuck her and later by Sunset. (Although this chapter plus more weren't written at the time but you get the idea) it all sounded like a great idea at the time but for some reason I didn't think anyone would like it. So I abandoned it entirely.
Thee second was to build a non canon story about Sunset and Adagio getting into the adult market. Sunset learns that Twilight's mom "Velvet" is also a hunter along with her own group; Night light, Cadance and Shining Armor.
They team up with Sunset who helps them fuck teenagers in exchange for Sunset and her crew will get a chance at some adult pussy. Also a good idea but I could never figure out how to execute it properly. So I just gave up on the whole thing.
Now I want to try again and try doing both ideas and see how it goes. Start out small and work my way up.
I think I'll call it Sunset's Canterlot High’s Secret Somnophilia Craze (Bonus edition)
To be honest, I kind of lost my vision for this one for a while and just barely managed to crack out a sorta rushed ending if that isn't obvious enough. I feel like I enjoy writing the actual stripping and talking scenes rather than just the sex.
Anyways, just for fun, here are some potential ideas I came up for as future chapters. I don't think I'll ever get to writing them though, so I'm posting them here:
-The group catches wind that the newly wed Shining Armor, and their principal Cadance are attempting to conceive their first child. They do what they do best and see if they can if they can knock up their principal while she's out, and have her believe the child is her husband's. Kinda seems like they are taking things to far though.
-CHS and Crystal Prep attend Camp Everfree together. Turns out CHS has a similar group of guys who are into fucking their sleeping classmates. Really makes you think who isn't in on this... Anyways, Sunset and her new allies from both schools now perfect a better gas-based method to knock out people out. Then they enjoy literally every girl at their two schools who they want to piece of. Includes a heart warming segment of brotherly bonding as Thunderlane teaches Rumble how to fuck the three sleeping members of the CMC.
-Adagio regains some of her powers due to her close relationship with Sunset and gets the ability to control the minds of their prey. Seemed like fun to be taking the same advantage over the victims, but having them conscious enough to fuck back... though it probably ventured outside the scope of this story's main kink.
-A twist chapter that reveals a good number of female students are also into drugging guys asleep and riding their dicks. The two sides eventually discover each other and realize they are being stupid and everyone just wants to have sex... which they then have.
I like the last two. The power regain could be played out perfectly if she uses her power to fuck them while they're awake and make them forget. Or just have the girls block them out of thier kinds so our futa duo can blow away at them as if they're invisible.
For a minute thier I thought the girls were gonna start getting suspicious of sunset and start investigating on why so many of them are always sore after sleeping over at sunsets.
It would make a good non canon what if story, how both CHS and CP female students some how learned of each other similar situation, and start investigating, and even plant camreas in Sunsets house and catch her in the act, thus forcing Sunset to reveal and show everything to all her victims, the only questions are will the girls seek vengeance or let fun continue.
I really enjoy this story, and I luv everything about it. Its been a real fun read. Awesome job
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That Camp Everfree idea would make for a GREAT one-off sequel if you ever wanted to do that. I actually really like how you make this into a business type thing. It’s like Pulp Fiction and Reservoir Dogs and how they treat crime all business-like.
Okay... question here. For the sake of this story, the idea that works makes at least a semblance of sense. However, does Fluttershy even know the dude before all this? I don’t think a smell thing would work if she never consciously smelled him before.
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Probably happened during their time partying beforehand.
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Fair enough I suppose.
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These are all great ideas!
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For the group of guys from CHS, if this were to include Flash Sentry, that could give you a new character arc for Sunset.
And discovering the group of girls turning the tables sounds like the perfect 'happily ever after' to end this on.
If it's alright with you can I write a story base off this one but taking place in the same universe?
Like a bunch of side stories.
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Sure thing. Go for it.
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Thanks
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I did actually try starting that story but I abandoned it because I didn't exactly know what I wanted to do at the time. I had two ideas.
The first was to take sex moments that were mentioned but we didn't really get to see and build a detailed sex scene around them. I would go through every girl that was mentioned that didn't have a strong sex scene; like fleur being carried to the bathroom by Adagio so she can fuck her and later by Sunset. (Although this chapter plus more weren't written at the time but you get the idea) it all sounded like a great idea at the time but for some reason I didn't think anyone would like it. So I abandoned it entirely.
Thee second was to build a non canon story about Sunset and Adagio getting into the adult market. Sunset learns that Twilight's mom "Velvet" is also a hunter along with her own group; Night light, Cadance and Shining Armor.
They team up with Sunset who helps them fuck teenagers in exchange for Sunset and her crew will get a chance at some adult pussy. Also a good idea but I could never figure out how to execute it properly. So I just gave up on the whole thing.
Now I want to try again and try doing both ideas and see how it goes. Start out small and work my way up.
I think I'll call it Sunset's Canterlot High’s Secret Somnophilia Craze (Bonus edition)