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I would prefer not to have pictures here, and I am not a gamer so these refferences are also utterly irrelevant.
The only reason for yu to include either is if you intend to come out as more clecter than you actually are.

But if you care to elaborate, I would be quite happy to listen to any constructive critisim you have to offer.

Narrative is ballanced between scene and foreshadowing, which it feels as if you had either ignoed or just missed.

things that aren't important are addressed for no reason but her palms are never elaborated on after the chair incident, The Mistress seems to be stuck in a wall because she talks without being mentioned and her changelings appear out of no where!

if it is mentioned, it has importance to the story, in one fashion or the other.
If a character seems to be stuck, she is actually stuck, not just seems to be.
They did not just appear out of nowhere, but were revealed at the time to explain something.

Ps, wonder who did not like this response, and why..