What will you sacrifice to save those you love...?
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Dun dun dun! So much delicious plot development. Things are starting to accelerate, aren't they.
I like this story series, I really do but I have to vent here.
I wish you chose a different way to get Twilight and Sun to the games. the whole blackmail should not work in this universe considering.
A: Cadance knows Cinch has allowed illegal stuff so why the fuck would she even allow Cinch and Twilight to meet alone. she is second in command of the school and HAS power over Cinch she is just too cowardly to use it.
B: Twilight knows Cinch allowed her bullying and rape so likely has been blackmailing. so why not have her cellphone on record?
C: Cinch knows they know and her protections are gone and she is STILL trying to pull this shit.
It feels stupidity for sake of plot and you are a better writer then that.
Indigo Zap doesn't know the meaning of the word love. Sun was right, if she did love Twilight, she would not have put her through such abuse, and even if her desire to be popular was overwhelming her feelings towards Twilight, her heart would be breaking on the inside at what she was doing to Twilight for her own self image, not relishing in her suffering like the rest of her perverted self. It's not love, it's some form of twisted desire, she wants to own Twilight.
This just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see how the friendship games (or is it FIENDSHIP) turn out. There's just one thing missing from this amazing fic. The extremely adorable fluffy ball of cuteness and randomness known as FLUFFLE PUFF!!!!
I wonder what will happen when Indigo Zap decides to throw her inhibitions away and...(wait for it)...LET IT GO!?
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So she is basically a female version of Robert Berdella. He is a American serial killer and rapist who kidnapped men to live out his twisted and perverted fantasies.
Very glad to see you've continued this story. I just got caught up and I'm excited to see how the story progress. Though I admit I sort of hope that Pinkie will develop more as a character and not just be the peppy girl that's occasional comic relief.
You got to finish. The others were so good that I really want to finish this one. Maybe you could add a scene where sunset writes to twilight and tells everything that been happening. I keep trying to imagine her freaking out about the windgos that attacked and everything else and trying to see if there is a book that can help.
Go to Horny Jail.
Thankfully, the Shimmer sisters can easily turn her to ashes.
Unfortunately, they can't be everywhere or/and always with her, especially with Blood Sword who can give them a run for their money one on one (and even two-on-one isn't a "win everytimes")
Aria Blaze, I like you.
So, does that mean Cinch might get powers ?
Was she purged or is the Blood Sword just knocked out ?
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I agree with you.