Lewds aside, really think a good plot is forming with the whole Dream Valley thing. Can see how that alone could be expanded into something amazing. In more ways than one.
Holy crud, that is one Heck of a chapter. Im going to be finding new things to remember and take note of for a week.
Nive AU variation, not having Chrysalis use Holly as a one off, would she actually be using that as a disguise, or actually sending text and images in as reports, staying with steady small stuff so she is never in danger of rising the ranks and being asked to handle the heavy stuff?
I was thinking of an appropiate mechanism for Smolder, and realised, Dragon Hoard. Everything she takes becomes hoard, according to Twilight, increasing size of the pocket dimention requires only small consequent magic, her ability capability can be tied to size of hoard, so as long as the lowest quality objects gain size equal to at least only slightly less than their volume, such as rocks, soil, water, ice etc, then anything with greater work, minerals, gems, artifacts, constructions etc, would make more room than they take?
Crysalis is from the Great Dune Sea, which means she Definitely knows about Tatzlewyrms, which means she has tentacle tongues and giant size, keeping everyone very well handled, but theres a chance she migh also know about variations, abyssal sea serpent, leviathans, but for Dig, the more intresting version would be the Ice Worm, which can navigate and bore through ice, normally exuding consumed ice behind it, traveling in a pocket, but if her tail is in Smolder, then an open tunnel can be left behind instead? And similar for other materials where attempted?
An intresting feedback loop then has the chance to occur, that Smolder demanding Crysalis use her as the Hive, stimulates Smolder to love being filled, which feeds Chrysalis, that feeds the eggs, that lets lots of eggs be made directly fertilised, and even more eggs as drone clones unless Dig specifically states they are not to be created? This could easily start with a misunderstanding of Dig demanding Chrysalis give Smolder ALL the eggs, assuming that the First Egg can remain seperated and continue growing, as it has all the food and no problems with room?
The great thing about the girls and Dig having Very specific requirements, maybe due to being Enhanced by Digs Curse, is that the harem egg slaves would remain less than Ponyville in number, but now they can get Chrysalis to let them try out All the possible different races variations, and combinations they can think or dream up? Which would give Twilight lots of research possibilities, because she would beleive its like Kevin and Thorax, a Freindly Changeling?
Trying now to think on how to make Pleasureland Pocket Dimention access, so the Changeling Hive can be and run Animal Shelter, Petting zoo, Amusement Park, Brothel, and even Arcade? I get this thought of Wreck It Ralph style cabinets, inside which minature changelings act in situations according to flash cards flipped up by what control is pressed by the player?
Still no news from Zecora, or is she still having Intresting Times with the various artifacts given, and isnt quite into eggs as yet?
Oh dear, forgot about Gilda. Building her an Aerie, for placing eggs once laid until they hatch, if they only take a further month or two once laid, even if she gets a new one each week, she would need space for only four or so, unless Dig was so rich, she started ovulating both sides each time, and each egg started off a DoubleYolker before splitting into seperates, or just gorwing into even larger Twins eggs? Will Dig, due to the hospital visit, now Order Gilda to lay her eggs when they reach Mature Size, no matter how early they appear to be, which means if they still take Full Term, that would need a Lot of egg spaces in the arie?
Poor Ember? All this time and exitement with everyone else, and all she is getting mind break sex once a day,a nd spending the rest of the time doing mysterious things with all the magical artifacts in her hoard, Accounting for them? Is she conciously setting or saving something up? Or did Chaos roll a Nat 20 on random incidentals, and something spectacular is about to happen, hopefully at the most inopportune time?
The combination of Smolder and Chrysalis is mind bogglingly explosive with lewd, kink and obscene possibilities, never mind propositions of buisiness and otherwise. Given Smolders experience with the Hospital just with the first egg, and comparing it to her first time with Dig, and how she has been treated since, given how she loves it, could Chrysalis Shrink as far as she could go, then Enter Smolder, in order to train her on handling Eggs from the inside out, so Smolder can look forward to never having to go to the Hospital ever again, as far as Eggs are concerned, no matter how many, how fast, how alrge, and how not egg shaped they are?
Thank you very much. I think its more of a paniced reaction to the thought that I love this story with its exploration of what happens with magical suffused weird life, given non magical real life is so weird to start with. Just look up Worlds Weirdest Plants, Animals, Fungi etc, World Record breakers, Myths and Legends, and then Equestria can have Everything turned up to 12 easily?
Dig and family only know Egg Factory can shape and size change from her normal near alicorn size, down to average pony size, but EF knows and has shape shifted before from I beleive mouse to Hydra, given Ocellus achieved that size? But that was with little Love energy she had before. With her current situation, free to act orders, and not being limited by discovery, she can then possibly massively expand her size range to explore, like the Wizards Duel, mentions from Twilight and Spike, and stories about the Hospital lets her consider helping her Master call her a Very Good Girl, by looking up Healing and otherwise plants and animals, becoming the millimetres long egg laying parasitic wasp, or even bacteria, being fed the Hospitals Pathology Sample collection, working out defence and treatment each time, then how to make bacterial healing changeling drones for mass production of treatments?
EF doesnt even have to shift directly down to brain infesting and mind affecting parasite, but can try and learn which plants make up Zecoras potions and other compounds, and shift into those, at least for dispensible harvesting, would have to get happy with piercings etc for fluid tap extraction, and sample coring? A combination of Shaman knowledge and Hospital instruments?
A possible problem? with EF training abuse of Smolder? Because EF can detect, analyze and feed very accurately indeed off emotions, then no matter how much Smolder screams, as long as her Lust is greater than her Pain, its EFs orders to not just coninue but try harder, which suggests Smolder would not just become a masochist, but respond in turn in flexing her body and magic to tighten up no matter how small to Get that stimulus? Eventually, with enoughEmber brutality training on her whole body, so she never has to go through what Ember did, Smolder has a chance of her overall body flexibility being consumed by her Masochistic Hoard Ability, making her slowly gain the properties of Elastigirl etc? She can be twisted, bent, stretched etc to hurt as much as she desires, but she cant be broken? This leads to a possible medical curse, and its solution, where on the one end a person feels as if all their pain nerves are always active, Fire Skin? and the totally opposite end of that curse is where someone feels no pain whatsoever? Theres one lady in RL, who feels No pain at all, physical And Emotional either. She cant be Mentally broken.
Sorry for the size, you write stuff that makes me remember scenes from books, movies etc from long ago, which likely have become corrupted with time and so are something different.
Something that I would find hilarious, but dont exactly expect to see occur because Dig has So Much Ponyville life to get through, is Daring, Cabaleron and Auitzotle fighting over a massive trap and treasure filled Temple, only for Smolder to sneak past, climb on top, and Take All Of It, then sneak off again before they notice its gone.
Fuck that was so hot... Wile i dislike mindcontrol it was agreed upon and not miss used. I guess Dig Site will go down in history books as the egg master! Griffin Dragon Changeling He will have his own private hive in no time
Lewds aside, really think a good plot is forming with the whole Dream Valley thing. Can see how that alone could be expanded into something amazing. In more ways than one.
Holy crud, that is one Heck of a chapter. Im going to be finding new things to remember and take note of for a week.
Nive AU variation, not having Chrysalis use Holly as a one off, would she actually be using that as a disguise, or actually sending text and images in as reports, staying with steady small stuff so she is never in danger of rising the ranks and being asked to handle the heavy stuff?
I was thinking of an appropiate mechanism for Smolder, and realised, Dragon Hoard. Everything she takes becomes hoard, according to Twilight, increasing size of the pocket dimention requires only small consequent magic, her ability capability can be tied to size of hoard, so as long as the lowest quality objects gain size equal to at least only slightly less than their volume, such as rocks, soil, water, ice etc, then anything with greater work, minerals, gems, artifacts, constructions etc, would make more room than they take?
Crysalis is from the Great Dune Sea, which means she Definitely knows about Tatzlewyrms, which means she has tentacle tongues and giant size, keeping everyone very well handled, but theres a chance she migh also know about variations, abyssal sea serpent, leviathans, but for Dig, the more intresting version would be the Ice Worm, which can navigate and bore through ice, normally exuding consumed ice behind it, traveling in a pocket, but if her tail is in Smolder, then an open tunnel can be left behind instead? And similar for other materials where attempted?
An intresting feedback loop then has the chance to occur, that Smolder demanding Crysalis use her as the Hive, stimulates Smolder to love being filled, which feeds Chrysalis, that feeds the eggs, that lets lots of eggs be made directly fertilised, and even more eggs as drone clones unless Dig specifically states they are not to be created? This could easily start with a misunderstanding of Dig demanding Chrysalis give Smolder ALL the eggs, assuming that the First Egg can remain seperated and continue growing, as it has all the food and no problems with room?
The great thing about the girls and Dig having Very specific requirements, maybe due to being Enhanced by Digs Curse, is that the harem egg slaves would remain less than Ponyville in number, but now they can get Chrysalis to let them try out All the possible different races variations, and combinations they can think or dream up? Which would give Twilight lots of research possibilities, because she would beleive its like Kevin and Thorax, a Freindly Changeling?
Trying now to think on how to make Pleasureland Pocket Dimention access, so the Changeling Hive can be and run Animal Shelter, Petting zoo, Amusement Park, Brothel, and even Arcade? I get this thought of Wreck It Ralph style cabinets, inside which minature changelings act in situations according to flash cards flipped up by what control is pressed by the player?
Still no news from Zecora, or is she still having Intresting Times with the various artifacts given, and isnt quite into eggs as yet?
That was beyond epic I'm happy Chrysalis joined the herd
Oh dear, forgot about Gilda. Building her an Aerie, for placing eggs once laid until they hatch, if they only take a further month or two once laid, even if she gets a new one each week, she would need space for only four or so, unless Dig was so rich, she started ovulating both sides each time, and each egg started off a DoubleYolker before splitting into seperates, or just gorwing into even larger Twins eggs? Will Dig, due to the hospital visit, now Order Gilda to lay her eggs when they reach Mature Size, no matter how early they appear to be, which means if they still take Full Term, that would need a Lot of egg spaces in the arie?
Poor Ember? All this time and exitement with everyone else, and all she is getting mind break sex once a day,a nd spending the rest of the time doing mysterious things with all the magical artifacts in her hoard, Accounting for them? Is she conciously setting or saving something up? Or did Chaos roll a Nat 20 on random incidentals, and something spectacular is about to happen, hopefully at the most inopportune time?
The combination of Smolder and Chrysalis is mind bogglingly explosive with lewd, kink and obscene possibilities, never mind propositions of buisiness and otherwise. Given Smolders experience with the Hospital just with the first egg, and comparing it to her first time with Dig, and how she has been treated since, given how she loves it, could Chrysalis Shrink as far as she could go, then Enter Smolder, in order to train her on handling Eggs from the inside out, so Smolder can look forward to never having to go to the Hospital ever again, as far as Eggs are concerned, no matter how many, how fast, how alrge, and how not egg shaped they are?
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I love your running commentary and theory-crafting. Sometimes it's a lot to take in but we really appreciate it.
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Thank you very much. I think its more of a paniced reaction to the thought that I love this story with its exploration of what happens with magical suffused weird life, given non magical real life is so weird to start with. Just look up Worlds Weirdest Plants, Animals, Fungi etc, World Record breakers, Myths and Legends, and then Equestria can have Everything turned up to 12 easily?
Dig and family only know Egg Factory can shape and size change from her normal near alicorn size, down to average pony size, but EF knows and has shape shifted before from I beleive mouse to Hydra, given Ocellus achieved that size? But that was with little Love energy she had before. With her current situation, free to act orders, and not being limited by discovery, she can then possibly massively expand her size range to explore, like the Wizards Duel, mentions from Twilight and Spike, and stories about the Hospital lets her consider helping her Master call her a Very Good Girl, by looking up Healing and otherwise plants and animals, becoming the millimetres long egg laying parasitic wasp, or even bacteria, being fed the Hospitals Pathology Sample collection, working out defence and treatment each time, then how to make bacterial healing changeling drones for mass production of treatments?
EF doesnt even have to shift directly down to brain infesting and mind affecting parasite, but can try and learn which plants make up Zecoras potions and other compounds, and shift into those, at least for dispensible harvesting, would have to get happy with piercings etc for fluid tap extraction, and sample coring? A combination of Shaman knowledge and Hospital instruments?
A possible problem? with EF training abuse of Smolder? Because EF can detect, analyze and feed very accurately indeed off emotions, then no matter how much Smolder screams, as long as her Lust is greater than her Pain, its EFs orders to not just coninue but try harder, which suggests Smolder would not just become a masochist, but respond in turn in flexing her body and magic to tighten up no matter how small to Get that stimulus? Eventually, with enoughEmber brutality training on her whole body, so she never has to go through what Ember did, Smolder has a chance of her overall body flexibility being consumed by her Masochistic Hoard Ability, making her slowly gain the properties of Elastigirl etc? She can be twisted, bent, stretched etc to hurt as much as she desires, but she cant be broken? This leads to a possible medical curse, and its solution, where on the one end a person feels as if all their pain nerves are always active, Fire Skin? and the totally opposite end of that curse is where someone feels no pain whatsoever? Theres one lady in RL, who feels No pain at all, physical And Emotional either. She cant be Mentally broken.
Sorry for the size, you write stuff that makes me remember scenes from books, movies etc from long ago, which likely have become corrupted with time and so are something different.
Something that I would find hilarious, but dont exactly expect to see occur because Dig has So Much Ponyville life to get through, is Daring, Cabaleron and Auitzotle fighting over a massive trap and treasure filled Temple, only for Smolder to sneak past, climb on top, and Take All Of It, then sneak off again before they notice its gone.
Fuck that was so hot... Wile i dislike mindcontrol it was agreed upon and not miss used. I guess Dig Site will go down in history books as the egg master!
Griffin
Dragon
Changeling
He will have his own private hive in no time
That last bit sounds interesting