This chapter really did make up for the previous chapter for it'S hotness, and the struggle really showed in this one one before she unwittingly subsumes to the magic influence. I loved the idea with the mirror and staring at them for her mind to wonder like a filly. I think the frizzled mane the complete lose of her magic, her gender and even her name there isn't much left of her original self. Now I take it there is still the color of her mane, coat and eyes, without forgetting her tail. I take it that she will get some of her senses back after the climax, but I wonder if she will realize that she can't remember her original name or realizes that her mind automatically sensor her gender.
If there is ever a sequel to this I hope it's either Sunburst or Flash Sentry, but the set up will be different.
10040670 It's been tagged 'Mature' and 'Porn' from the start tho. Sorry if the transition to the cloppy stuff didn't work for you. I get that a fic turning out a way you don't like can bite, but this was always my plan for this one.
10041300 It's been my favorite part of the story to write so far! Minus having to do all the italics... kinda wished I'd picked a different gimmick by the end, but oh well.
10041275 He'd be lucky to remember her at this point.
And on the last stage waits ....dum dum duuuum.... Cadance, who set this cosplay trap just for her lovely Husband Babygirl. No mather what happens it's already a great story
Ah, nuts! Shining... err... Gleaming couldn't resist the pull of the manipulative tower. I could only imagine if, in some way, he'll never forget making out with his own reflection, dressed like a sissy, and delighting in a soaked diaper.
This will certainly be one thing Shi-Gleaming err. Shining will take to his grave.
Just curious,but how many more floors are planned?
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Gonna spoiler tag it so some people can keep the mystery aspect if the want, but we reach the top in the next chapter.
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considering what happened on this floor, that makes sense
This chapter really did make up for the previous chapter for it'S hotness, and the struggle really showed in this one one before she unwittingly subsumes to the magic influence. I loved the idea with the mirror and staring at them for her mind to wonder like a filly. I think the frizzled mane the complete lose of her magic, her gender and even her name there isn't much left of her original self. Now I take it there is still the color of her mane, coat and eyes, without forgetting her tail. I take it that she will get some of her senses back after the climax, but I wonder if she will realize that she can't remember her original name or realizes that her mind automatically sensor her gender.
If there is ever a sequel to this I hope it's either Sunburst or Flash Sentry, but the set up will be different.
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Coming to her senses would probably be the worst thing for her. I don't think Shining would be able to handle what Gleaming has done.
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Oh will it be a case of split personalty then, I wonded.
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I don't think I consider it to be quite that extreme, but... maybe?
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Sorry, I though that was what you were implying...
Why'd you make this a clopfic? It sounds like it'd make for a good normal adventure story.
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It's been tagged 'Mature' and 'Porn' from the start tho. Sorry if the transition to the cloppy stuff didn't work for you. I get that a fic turning out a way you don't like can bite, but this was always my plan for this one.
I wonder, did Shining completely forget about Cadence now?
I love the slow burn happening here. Just watching
shininggleam losehimherself is soo.. unf.10041300
It's been my favorite part of the story to write so far! Minus having to do all the italics... kinda wished I'd picked a different gimmick by the end, but oh well.
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He'd be lucky to remember her at this point.
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I would have thought that Shining would still need to eat foalfood and do a poopy before being definitively crushed.
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Honestly mental overwrites like this are just top to me. It's rare that you get one that is a slow burn, too. Most just poof and new mindset.
Seems Sombra win and Shining will be no more by the end. Or he will be stuck thinking he is a mare and padded
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Aw come on, have some faith in Shining. He's not... I mean he wouldn't... just looking at his track record he...
Yeah, he's screwed.
And on the last stage waits ....dum dum duuuum.... Cadance, who set this cosplay trap just for her lovely Husband Babygirl. No mather what happens it's already a great story
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Thanks! Really glad to hear you're liking it so far. And I think you'll enjoy what I have planned next too.
Ah, nuts! Shining... err... Gleaming couldn't resist the pull of the manipulative tower. I could only imagine if, in some way, he'll never forget making out with his own reflection, dressed like a sissy, and delighting in a soaked diaper.
This will certainly be one thing Shi-Gleaming err. Shining will take to his grave.