I like where this is going so far. I hope it gets continued sooner rather than later.

9899915
I hope I get it out soon too. Glad you like it so far!

Oh! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!

9900010
I think you're gonna like it

This definitely was worth the wait. This is because the visuals are great, the setting is certainly one that draws you in, and the introduction flowed as smooth as the surface of the tower itself.

The discovery of the 'window at the top' was a wonderful foreshadow for what was ahead. The 'living' aspect of the tower itself also reminds me of something a magic akin to The Tree of Harmony would have.

The story also does what is sometimes forgotten in such a tale. This being having a genuine plot and conflict outside of what is wrapped around Shinig's plot. :)

When Shining had some of his magic drained, I felt the 'atmosphere' of the room. The feel I was getting, thanks to the chapter title, is how one may feel if put into a kind of 'puzzle' that is filled with an array of unknown possibilities as, like what The Tree of Harmony did, this place adjusts to whomever it traps.

I hear no music. I hear little sound. The only thing I feel is an open room where the flickering of the ethereal torches is heard along with the weary footsteps of Shining Armor. The sounds of the diaper would, without a doubt, make the most sound for the thereal torches would intentionally be light as to enhance what trials were in store for its latest visitor.

First floor complete -- On to the next level.

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Wow, I'm glad this one really struck a cord with you. Hopefully it lives up to your expectations going forward.

Nice been waiting for a story like this for a long while, I will be looking forward to see how it turns out, keep it up. Also, my offer still stands.

9900300
I've been waiting for a story like this for a long time too. Good thing I finally decided to just do it

I'll be honest, I've seriously considered your offer in the past for a number fics. This one I think settled on some pretty solid cover art already, but I may not be able to resist commissioning a picture of Shining based on what he'll look like come the end of the story. I'll let you know if I feel like it

Only complaint is how unprofessional and uncooperative the guards were with their ruler/boss.

9901762
Shining wasn't exactly able to spare his best and brightest for this mission. But I'm glad to hear you like the rest!

9900362
I will be looking forward to that.

Oh, this should be fun...

9903441
Oh, it will be

Really enjoyed this first chapter : ) hitting all the right kinks in my opinion

also

And besides, he really didn’t want to screw up this last chance. If he couldn’t get out this time, he may be actually be stuck.

has an extra be

He had to spread his hind legs out even further to accommodate the new padding. It was so think that he worried for a moment he wouldn’t be able to walk at all.

probably supposed to be thick

9905945
Sounds like you're hooked for the rest of poor Shining's journey. Good

And thanks for catching those mistakes, really appreciate it.

There is never enough Shining Armor material of this sort~

Can't wait for what's next!

9906529
I know right? I feel bad it's taken me this long to find an idea for a story with him.

9906740
Good! And i think you'll really like it

I like it! Excited for more when u get time!

9916789
Good! I'm excited to write more soon, if I can