This was definitely my favorite ending

This ending was the best, I like Celestia's dominant yet comforting attitude

Oh my...

Celestia you naughty Goddess! Who knew!

Lot of celestia fans in here!

Well, that's one way to end a hilarious clop story. On to the other ones!

Favorite and my canon ending, life is good

“Hmm… a surprise… but not an unwelcome one…” She purred.

I saw what you did there.

I was checking out the non-canon endings where Shining didn't blast his daughter full to the brim, and it seems you got kind of excited on your way to the real ending, because you started doubling-up on some things...

Shining felt the first, thick blast of cum spill out of his engorged cockslit, wincing and clenching…
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He squeaked, as the first steaming, boiling gout of cum splattered out from his engorged cockslit, painting Celestia’s uterus.

Yay rolled that 3 first time and liked my ending.

That was probably a shock and a half for Twilight, going from tied up and full of dick to being in the air.

“Sh-shit!” He swore as he felt the rolling, crushing, power of the God-alicorn’s cunt as it squeezed his shaft like a tube of toothpaste, drawing every drop of his boiling ejaculations out of his obsidian hore-cock.

Hore? :thinking:

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I don't get it. Would you be so kind as to explain?

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A reference to Star Wars:

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I like Celestia's dominant yet comforting attitude

Me too!

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*looks at the avatar*
Seems legit.

Gotta love the implication that Twilight went from being rutted into the ground to a sudden free fall in the sky.

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Oof that's a good point, hopefully her wings didn't lock up.

This was my canon ending. It was definitely enjoyable!

Dumb as hell, but also hot. Good work.

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Thank you!

second.
equal quality to the first (fifth)