Sometimes bad things happen, and nobody knows if its an accident or fate. Amidst Anon-a-Miss one such event happens, leaving students and princesses in grief. Yet, where one fire is extinguished, somewhere, another one is lit ablaze.
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Joker: Just one bad day.
Hmmm, suspect to say the least.
Is she actually dead? They never found her body yet they recovered all the others. Plus it's not like she's a magical being from another dimension or something... oh wait.
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hmmm na, something like that would neeever happen. And magical being, another dimension? Pft, as if such things would ever influence such things.
[Small correction, they only fully recovered two bodies, most likely the ones driving. They can assume it were five in total because they have records of how many medics where in the car + patient. So in essence three bodies were not recovered. Still, you're not wrong ]
Respect for giving Gilda actual character traits in this chapter. Too many authors treat her as an angry punchy goon with no personality at all.
Aside from a few errors here and there, this is pretty good for an AAM fic so far. Definitely better than average. That said, I'm kinda concerned that it's gonna devolve into one of those spooky scary demon Sunset slaughterfest revenge fantasy fics, but to be fair you pleasantly surprised me with this chapter. Here's hoping you continue to do so.
Will you ever go back to the school? I really want to see how that Stubborn mule of a bitch AppleJack reacted to the truth. that she was a failure of a friend.,
So they don't actually have a body to bury??? They only found two from the ambulance?
minor error
This story interests me.
*"At that time, obvious reasons." At that point, implies that they were right about their assumptions and are still right. At the time would be better since it only applies to events that happened before they actually realized that Sunset was innocent.
Welcome to the feeling of a Pyrrhic Victory, you little BRATS!
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Brats is just a dickish thing to call them. They had a chimpout and it resulted in a fucking magical suicide, but they can't be charged with conspiracy to murder. At best, slander charges. But they're not confessing ad momentum. Sweetie is too emotional, and I honest to god wouldn't be surprised if she offed herself.