New chapter hype Dear sweet innocent Scoots It’s refreshing to see through such pure eyes after all the debauchery of the prequel. It brings out the genunity of the love between the two, with TiM-like feels. 10/10 would hug.
How can it be that after everything that happened up to this point every show of affection between Rainbow and Twilight feels like the first time all over again? From Scoots to Spike to pseudo-privacy, they’re pouring out so much emotion. Is it wrong of me to like this better than porn? Porn is awesome too, I swear!
Generally if I'm reading anything tagged Mature it's gore/action type reasons, but uh, yeah, got recommended to read Bad Girl Twilight and this is solid, 10/10 would recommend.
Scire had it right, you can see the emotion and where and how they care for each other. That and I like TwiDash as a pairing so hey.
I absolutely love that you have come back and started writing again. TiM is one of my favorite series, and is the one I have reread most on the site. That being said I had trouble with just the first paragraph of this one. I don't know if the editors have changed or if it's something else, but the tenses need correction.
At that time, atin that moment, she found it rather easy to forget the past few days. She could close her eyes and lostlose herself in the feeling, in of the soothing cream being placed against her tender back and wings.
The rest of the chapter makes me giggle like an idiot- well done.
“Still got some energy I see,” Twilight all but purred as she continued applying lotion, teasing Rainbow’s neithers[nethers] with each circle of her hoof.
“That’s so cool! I can’t wait to grow up. I’m going to get the others and see if we can find a way to grow up quicker!” Scootaloo exclaimed as she ran off in search of Sweetie Belle and Applebloom.
New chapter hype
Dear sweet innocent Scoots It’s refreshing to see through such pure eyes after all the debauchery of the prequel. It brings out the genunity of the love between the two, with TiM-like feels. 10/10 would hug.
How can it be that after everything that happened up to this point every show of affection between Rainbow and Twilight feels like the first time all over again? From Scoots to Spike to pseudo-privacy, they’re pouring out so much emotion. Is it wrong of me to like this better than porn? Porn is awesome too, I swear!
I really enjoyed the original, but this is so much better.
Generally if I'm reading anything tagged Mature it's gore/action type reasons, but uh, yeah, got recommended to read Bad Girl Twilight and this is solid, 10/10 would recommend.
Scire had it right, you can see the emotion and where and how they care for each other. That and I like TwiDash as a pairing so hey.
Must resist desires for TwiDash Scoot adoption.
Thank you for that moment.
I absolutely love that you have come back and started writing again. TiM is one of my favorite series, and is the one I have reread most on the site. That being said I had trouble with just the first paragraph of this one. I don't know if the editors have changed or if it's something else, but the tenses need correction.
At that time,
atin that moment, she found it rather easy to forget the past few days. She could close her eyes andlostlose herself in the feeling, inof the soothing cream being placed against her tender back and wings.The rest of the chapter makes me giggle like an idiot- well done.
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edited, thanks
And there's more TiM coming. :)
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so exciting. I love the detail in the emotions, very much the best and most lively Twidash fic!
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HAIL GRAMMAR!
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Sorry Scootaloo but "Growing Up is Hard to DO"
I hate too admit that i love this completly bucked up story... but here i am loving it!