Can't get enough of bookworm Twilight, who breaks her dom character to ramble on her latest discoveries. Love Rainbow with her ever-present awesome/softie dualism. Enthusiastic about their relation, started on a bizarre note but now on a conventional route and headed for the next great challenge: other ponies.
The two discussing what is and isn't off-limits gives me Clocktower vibes. It's different in an interesting way from the prequel, I Wonder where this discussion will go.
I learned something new today, "fleece mat" and "EFTJ" are the latest additions to my vocabulary. I blame Twilight.
The cover art is superb, pudge got such a great rainbow. Love the tattoo and the haircut, and her facial expression too. That cover makes justice to this story's awesomeness. Will the choker be put to good use?
Looking forward to the next chapters and everything they'll bring, both clop and story. I'm excited for this!
Well, according to the book your personality is close to an ESTJ
I always thought of Rainbow Dash as more of an ESTP. That said I don't know enough about Myers-Briggs to know how much that would alter the story. I'd class Twilight as INTJ. Cool that you have Sparklebutt using it and tying it into how she is 'training' Rainbow.
I'm enjoying how you've loaded this with potential drama bombs from the start. While I want life to be perfect and sexy and fun for the two, I know it's a better story if there's challenges. I expect the payoff would be better for it, too.
Damnit... this is like... my perfect fantasy... except my perfect fantasy requires Starlight or Applejack to be my mistress, and oooh... I like this story... being a nymphophile doesn't help matters...
9680848 It's about 3 days too early for Celestia's entrance. The end of BGT skipped ahead 5 days, this story covers those days (well some of those days).
Not saying we won't see some of the conversation with Celestia, but there were a lot of events that would be skipped if it picked up exactly where the last one left off (such as the conversations with the rest of the Mane 6). As such I decided to backtrack a little bit.
It's here!
Four years in the making
It's also great!
Can't get enough of bookworm Twilight, who breaks her dom character to ramble on her latest discoveries. Love Rainbow with her ever-present awesome/softie dualism. Enthusiastic about their relation, started on a bizarre note but now on a conventional route and headed for the next great challenge: other ponies.
The two discussing what is and isn't off-limits gives me Clocktower vibes. It's different in an interesting way from the prequel, I Wonder where this discussion will go.
I learned something new today, "fleece mat" and "EFTJ" are the latest additions to my vocabulary. I blame Twilight.
The cover art is superb, pudge got such a great rainbow. Love the tattoo and the haircut, and her facial expression too. That cover makes justice to this story's awesomeness. Will the choker be put to good use?
Looking forward to the next chapters and everything they'll bring, both clop and story. I'm excited for this!
Congratulations on hitting the feature box!
Re-upload?
yes <3
Not my favorite "genre" as such, but it's twidash, and I'm still waiting to see the hilarity when they find Celestia instead of Spike.
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Four years and Twi’s still completely out of fucks to give. May the glorious insanity commence.
A sequel?!?! IT IS!!!!!!! high pitched fangirl scream *cough* I mean, cool.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I may or may not have squeed when I saw what this is a sequel to.
RD is worried because Spike doesn't know about Twilight's changes. Well, Spike,Celestia,Luna,and a few others from Canterlot.
i can just hear rd making puppy noises
You got me. You dirty bitch you got me. Now I gotta wait to read more. I'm gonna read your other shit to pass the time
YES!!!
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No. Twidash decided to come back and write again.
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Twidash doesn't welch on his bets.
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Hah, you won't regret that.
Well, unless a few typos drive you crazy.
Still worth it!
Welcome back.
I always thought of Rainbow Dash as more of an ESTP. That said I don't know enough about Myers-Briggs to know how much that would alter the story. I'd class Twilight as INTJ. Cool that you have Sparklebutt using it and tying it into how she is 'training' Rainbow.
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I was 50/50 between the two. But upon further reflection I think you're right. Updated.
Color me surprised. One of my favorite stories got the sequel. Glad to see you back, this is a definite track.
I'm surprised Twilight's out-of-date enough to use the Myers-Briggs types.
I'm enjoying how you've loaded this with potential drama bombs from the start. While I want life to be perfect and sexy and fun for the two, I know it's a better story if there's challenges. I expect the payoff would be better for it, too.
OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH!!!
YOU'RE BACK! The story continues! I'm so excited!
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Damnit... this is like... my perfect fantasy... except my perfect fantasy requires Starlight or Applejack to be my mistress, and oooh... I like this story... being a nymphophile doesn't help matters...
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'Mistress Applejack' hm? That's cool.
Woah there; TMI, bro!
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Really? TMI on a story like this? Nah... But yes, Mistress Applejack cause I figure she'd be like, the mean, loving mistress
Err... Where's Celestia? She teleported there in the end of BGT, and this is sequel, where is she?
And how about Pinkie? Twilight hurt her quite badly, will we see an apology scene, deeply emotional and helpful for Pinkie?
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It's about 3 days too early for Celestia's entrance. The end of BGT skipped ahead 5 days, this story covers those days (well some of those days).
Not saying we won't see some of the conversation with Celestia, but there were a lot of events that would be skipped if it picked up exactly where the last one left off (such as the conversations with the rest of the Mane 6). As such I decided to backtrack a little bit.
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Oh! That makes sense. Thanks!