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Commentpony

Commentpony #1 · Jun 3rd, 2019 · 10 · ·

While it has a tragic storyline, it's a well-written story about a subject that needs to be painstakingly addressed. Please don't be discouraged by the dislikes and keep up your good work! I will be tracking this story and awaiting future chapters. Also, I'm sorry about your loved one and hope that they are doing better now.

OnlyButtonMash

OnlyButtonMash #2 · Jun 3rd, 2019 · 3 · ·

Holy...

WhispersInTheDark

WhispersInTheDark #3 · Jun 3rd, 2019 · 3 · ·

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Thank you for your kind words.

While the downvotes are somewhat discouraging, I'm not sure if they're because people don't like my story, or they don't like the subject matter. In any case, I'm gripped with the need to tell this tale, so I will be continuing regardless.

As for my loved one, thanks for that again. I'll be revealing her current condition when I finish the story.

Commentpony

Commentpony #4 · Jun 4th, 2019 · 2 · ·

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You're welcome and I'm quite glad to know that. I think the downvotes are related to the story's subject, not the story itself. My thoughts and prayers are with your loved one.

Basement

Basement #5 · Jun 5th, 2019 · 2 · ·

He gave her what he hoped was a winning smile, and said, "It's something special." He started to take off his trousers. "I'm sure you'll like it." Sweetie Belle was frozen in place. Never had an adult been so forward with her, and she didn't know what to do. When he finally removed his trousers, there was revealed a very erect penis...that was smaller than it should have been. He stepped closer to her. "Now you know my secret. I'm smaller than most stallions, so the only mares I can love are those your size." He reached out to her. "Come here."

How would Sweet know his penis is smaller than it should be? Otherwise this chapter gave me feels ;-;

WhispersInTheDark

WhispersInTheDark #6 · Jun 5th, 2019 · · ·

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Being a race of mostly nudists, Sweetie, like all fillys her age, have seen their fair share of stallion parts, so she'd have a good idea of how big they should be. Since she's Apple Bloom's friend, I'm sure she's seen Big Mac before, and Rule is almost his size in height.

In any case, thanks for reading!

Clopian26