As they were sitting there, Opalescence wandered into the room. She paused when she saw the new pony, then hissed and extended her claws. "Opal!" cried Rarity. "Be nice!" But the cat was having none of it. She sat herself in a corner of the room and refused to take her eyes off the stallion, hissing and yowling. Scooping her up in her magic, Rarity said, "I'm sorry, she's never like this. I'll just move her to somewhere else."
As they were sitting there, Opalescence wandered into the room. She paused when she saw the new pony, then hissed and extended her claws. "Opal!" cried Rarity. "Be nice!" But the cat was having none of it. She sat herself in a corner of the room and refused to take her eyes off the stallion, hissing and yowling. Scooping her up in her magic, Rarity said, "I'm sorry, she's never like this. I'll just move her to somewhere else."
When your pet is trying to tell you something’s up, something is up.
I’m going to be sick while reading this, but good work.
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It gets worse...
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I can imagine.
Only one chapter so far, and I'm already dreading the rest of this story.
Slide Rule is going to molest and/or rape Sweetie Belle. I can sense it coming.
This is written so realistically so far that i'm honestly enjoying it! I just know that I'm gonna feel bad for Sweetie ;-;.
Keep up the greta work!
Red flags: raised, Alarms: screaming, Rarity: Ignoring it.
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When your pet is trying to tell you something’s up, something is up.
You never ignore the warning signs Rarity, pets can be the best judgments of character.
ugh. Just, ugh, that's how I feel. How old is this stallion?
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He's in his mid-30s...so, far too old to be interested in someone Sweetie's age.
Apologies for what I'm about to put you through.