I this anthro ponies or humans version of ponies

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They are canon ponies, on all fours and the like.

The first thing that comes to mind when I read this in the description....

A human from an alternative Earth where the worlds of Naruto, Bleach, Avatar: TLA, Dragon Ball Super, Elders Scrolls and the Harry Potter series all share the same planet.

is...... (2:34)

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..................... plot twists??? Something to look into unless you're just messing with me but either way, funny video. Anyway thanks for the critic

I can't tell if you're serious or if you used the 'main character came from huge hybrid world' just to make him overpowered with so many things at his access.

Great story, can't wait for the next one,

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While it does seem he is overpowered, if he came up against someone like Discord or Celestia or Luna he'd be hard pressed to even get level with them. While I don't intent to nerf him, I'm working on making him not seem too OP. Thanks for the comment and hope you continue to read.

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Discord, yes, the other two? No. They were only powerful back in their prime, not unless this AU of yours has them as powerful.

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You definitely got a point there, about them not being in their prime anymore, I'll really take that into consideration when writing their interactions with each other. Thanks for the feedback, it's really helpful!!!

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No problem. To be honest, you should of gone in a different direction, instead of him having powers from so many universes, I'd stick giving only what is needed, or start with a small number and give him more powers as the story progresses.

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Thanks, you just made me realize I fell for the most obvious fault of new writers, "give the main character a bunch of powers off the bat without having to work for them". Now I've kinda got an idea for a skill set and I'm going to expand on that, again thanks for the critic and the feedback.

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No problem. ^^

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I mean...

That's still alittle OP since those three are basically gods...

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Maybe, but I kind of see it as Celestia and Luna more as maybe demi-gods rather than gods and Discord being the true god between the three of them. But I'm still working on their interactions when they meet and so on, so I still have some polishing to do before it gets there. Thanks for the comment and the critic!!!

All those universes on one planet and it hasn't destroyed itself yet?

I don’t understand how people can not like a story that’s only one chapter and hasn’t gotten to the actual story yet.

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I don't blame people for having an opinion, they can choose to dislike it if they want, its my job as the author to hopefully change their minds and getting them to liking it. So I hope I do a good job, thanks for commenting!!

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You’re welcome. It’s just that there wasn’t enough there to make an opinion like that, but what was there was enjoyable to me, and a good intro to the story.

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They're judging it according to the description.

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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I've rewritten the next chapter a few times now and the good news is that it's starting to come together now and I think that I should have it uploaded in a few days, thanks for the comment and hope you enjoy the next chapter!!

This was a awesome and sad start.

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