Oh hell yeah. You really popped off with these two chapters. I think a longer length suits you––I adore the weekly updates, don't get me wrong, but if you were ever thinking of switching to biweekly then you'd have my support

The conclusion of this whole argument felt nicely satisfying, and the clop was hot.

I also liked the further use of Gallus's powers. They're really cool oh my god I love dream stuff let me tell you

Keep it up, Parker. You're only getting better as you go on.

this chapter was wholesome as hell and with a bit of heart warming sexiness to go with it! I really loved seeing Gallus and Sandbar finally get things sorted with that dream. the imitation of Silverstream actually made me laugh, also I absolutely loved the bit with the lunar guards and the "ew, dont be a perv" line keep up the good work!

It's nice to address how Gallus, new to his powers, would take dreams a lot more seriously than he should, considering how he can control his vs most everyone else. And good they talk it out. Thanks for not dragging it out needlessly.

I'm loving the mix of danger and fun. Awesome job!

Squeee, this chapter was fantastic. Will read more later, but I'm really loving this story so far.