If "the stare" works on him I am dropping this story. Listen here this is a well-written story but. If a primitive skill that isn't even documented, and is the most likely just a superposition of will, works on a war hardened veteran of over a thousand years of fighting.

If the absolute stupidity that is the stare works on him then I'm retarded.

Good Job on the chapter though. Its refreshing to se a well written story where the MC is not a kiss-ass

*Lazor of MOAR fires*

You keep writing Frash Freeze, i imagine you mean Flash Freeze, other than that its all good so far, still have to wrap my head around how stromg he is compared to the rest of the world, but thats just me.

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Hmmm .... it might work on him for 3 seconds because she surprised him ... but like you said once his training kicks in I see him getting in her face and giving her his version of the stare. Almost hoping she flew into his face like the dragon just so he can grab her by the throat to deliver it ... which will get discord involved and get discord whooped.

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It either works or it doesn't work. Frankly while I do like some weakness in an MC, this fella isn't a self-insert, he has flaws but he is the most powerful creature on that planet by a longshot and additionally ahs fought wars. Wars that most likely held untold horrors, if these bio-weapons are any indication.

The stare of a tiny, innocent pony creature shall do nothing to a hardened war veteran.

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I do support this course of action. Partially.

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Dammit I heard too much 'Tell Me Why'!

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Finally someone realizes it!

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I do say sapient sometimes. The classification is a personal thing of Praeratus.

More :D

Fluttershy has one twisted sense of morality. I know she loves animals, but the truth is a sentient life doesn’t have the same value as a sapient one. She’d rather spare a vicious ursa going on a rampage, and endanger the lives it’s taking, then put it down to ensure no one dies. Praeratus would probably slay 1000 animals, without hesitation, if it meant saving 1 sapient life. And that’s something she’s just gonna have to live with.

AWESOME story dude!