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No! not the deer!
Btw good story keep it up
I cant help but feel that this chapter feels rushed, and Praeratus is acting like a undisciplined teenager with anger issues rather than a centuries old combat veteran. Flying off the handle like he does will not only get him an early grave but also for those around him as well. I like the story so far, but Praeratus better buckle down and get some of his military bearing back or the whole world will be paying for it.
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He will, I just wanted to show that he has to stay frosty. Of course, Centurions weren't exactly Spartans, but more like Space Marines, in the sense that they would be stoic and calm one moment, and the next screaming Rambos.