9506640 truth. The story is really cool, really good. but this fact makes it look like he has not been pulling out of his world and put on another one of colored mini horses, and it does seem like he has been traveling on vacation at his beautiful cousin's house he had never seen
9511292 To counter your question, why bother giving him a name? Anon is a widely accepted idea and saves effort of creating a character when its the story they are going for. Thats my thoughts anyway.
I know that this is a clopfic and all, but in my opinion they are getting too curious too early. And the fact that Anon just walked instantly into mayor mare was unfitting. Thats why anon fics that are at least few months with him in equestria already are more belivable
Good story so far. My only problem is that the main character kinda accepted pretty quickly that he was in another world.
I'm enjoying it so far. ^^
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Shock is a hell of a drug. Either that, or he's seen enough to genuinely not care.
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truth. The story is really cool, really good. but this fact makes it look like he has not been pulling out of his world and put on another one of colored mini horses, and it does seem like he has been traveling on vacation at his beautiful cousin's house he had never seen
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Also why is there Thousand Island dressing just randomly in Equestria?
Why is the character called Anon if the story is written in third person? Why not give him an actual name?
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To counter your question, why bother giving him a name? Anon is a widely accepted idea and saves effort of creating a character when its the story they are going for. Thats my thoughts anyway.
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For the same reason there are apples. A perfectly Earth-based foodstuff. Granny Smith apples, no less; the branding is important, there.
I know that this is a clopfic and all, but in my opinion they are getting too curious too early. And the fact that Anon just walked instantly into mayor mare was unfitting.
Thats why anon fics that are at least few months with him in equestria already are more belivable
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There are jumps in time between the chapters.
Still relatively fast paced, sure, but it strings along decently. (I think )
I Love it already
The boy moves fast.