Her world came rushing back. She bolted upright in her seat in a cold sweat, hear breath trying to keep time with her heart.
"You ok sugar cubes? You look paler than an albino pig in a hailstorm." Applejack whispered to her trying not to wake Octavia. Fluttershy had never been able to fully understand the way Applejack put things into perspective, but she didn't ques-
Wait a minute. This seems to familliar
"Uhh...yes...I-I'm fine." She looked at her friend still shaken from her dream, or at least she thought it was a dream.
"If you say so" Applejack turned back in her seat and started to yell at Apple Bloom and Scootaloo.
Ok,something isn't right here. I just...no..that was only a dream. I need to calm down and just enjoy the ride
She leaned back in her seat and a familiar pain shot through her as she nicked herself on the side of her chair. She immediately sat up and wiped the cut, the same blood pattern on her hoof as from her dream.
No, it can't be. That means that dream.....was real? She grabbed her headphones and turned her mp3 on listening as the heavy metal song changed pace and gave way to that same creepy song she heard before.
"...And I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. These dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had...."
She screamed as she threw her headphones across the car as she bolted towards the door.
"Let me out! We have to get off this train!" She pulled on the emergency brake, keeping the train from going anywhere.
"Fluttershy!" Twilight screamed as she, Rainbow Dash and Applejack all pinned their friend down as she struggled to get away."What are you talking about!?"
"We have to get out of here. I-i saw the train crash and go off the rails. We all are going to die if we don't get out of here." She forced her way out from the death grip of her friends as she burst through the double glass doors of the car. She ran and hid behind a pole, holding onto it for dear life.
"Fluttershy!" She looked up as her friends rushed over to her. "What the hay, we have to go." They tried to pull the yellow pegasus away from the poll but her grip was to strong.
"No, we have to get everyone off the train or else they are going to die!" She looked to her friends, fearful tears streaming down her face as her looks were returned. Their faces mixed fear, concern and regretful disbelief.
Twilight looked to the other ponies with a sigh as more got off to see what the commotion was about. She walked over to the white unicorn with the blue hair and talked for a second before rushing back. "Okay,how about this. How about you, me, Applejack, Pinkie and Rainbow dash go on foot. Vinyl here said that she can take the little ones back to town, and Rarity, Sweetie Belle and every pony else can take the train. We'll all meet up at the hotel."
Every head nodded in agreement except for Fluttershy's. "No, Twilight. If they get on that train they are going to die!"
"No pony is going to die!. Rarity we'll see you there okay?" Rarity nodded to her friend as she herded her sister into the train as the doors closed.
Fluttershy raced to the windows and banged on the sides as the cars began to roll away. "Rarity get off now!" All her efforts were in vain, the train sped along never to look back. She knew what was going to happen and she fell to the ground crying for the loss of her friend before it happened.
Twilight watched the train speed off down the tracks. "You see Fluttershy, nothing happened. Rarity and them are going to be fine." She sat beside her saddened friend stroking her mane, but to no avail.
"Twi, just let her be. She just needs some alone time." Applejack sighed, her country accent just as thick as ever.
"Yeah, she's right." Rainbow snapped " Great, now we have to walk to Los Pegasus just because Fluttershy here is afraid of the train. Come on lets get this over wi-" Her sentence was cut short as the sound of metal scraping against metal filled the air. Even from a mile away they could see the pile of twisted metal cars and the horrific pained screams of the ponies aboard.
"No....it can't....no!!!!!" Fluttershy screamed as tears flowed down her muzzle in streams, her cry's drowned out by the deafening roar of the explosion as the second train collided with the pile of cars. All the ponies stared in silence at the flaming rubble. Not a word was said, just looks of fear directed towards Fluttershy as she cried.
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3 Days Later
Mayor Mare stepped down from the podium as the rain began to fall. She looked at the crowd of mourners as they began to disperse, only a few remaining behind walking to the coffins of their friends. Why, why must these innocent ponies have died in such a horrible way she thought as she walked back towards town.
Fluttershy sat motionless in front of Rarity and Sweetie Belle's coffins.Why she thought as she kicked the ground as hard as she could Why didn't I save them! I should have died on that train too. Why oh why!!. She sank to the ground, tears of anger and despair falling onto her friends still and lifeless face.
"F-fluttershy?" Twilight walked up to her placing a hoof on her shoulder, a black umbrella being held above the both of them. "I...I'm sorry I didn't believe you...I just.."
"No, don't be sorry Twilight. What's done is done, and we can't do anything about it. She walked on through the rain towards her cabin. No matter how hard her friends tried to comfort her and apologize, she felt nothing but sadness and guilt. She knew what was going to happen and she should have done more to stop it. She burst through the doors of her house, all her animals knew that she was sad and not a single peep was made. Even Angel's normally demanding attitude seem to lighten up, even if just for a moment or two.
Knock!Knock! "Fluttershy? Please open the door." Princess Celestia stood outside the door waiting in the pouring rain, but even if it was her....she wasn't going to open up. She dragged herself to her room, the knocking at the door growing ever fainter. Slamming the door to her room behind her, she crawled into her bed and grabbed a photo off her nightstand .It was a picture of her and Rarity at the spa one day a few weeks back.
I'm sorry Rarity. I'm sorry Sweetie Belle. I'm sorry I"m sorry I',m sorry! She closed her eyes and drifted off into the only place she seemed safe and happy anymore.
Her Dreams.....
ok this chapter went by kinda fast and was kinda boring and repetitive, but hey it is going to get better...alot of ideas coming up for this story.
I don't see why this is not getting entirely good reviews--it's actually pretty good. I mean, I've read worse fanfiction, and it's not like I have anything bad to say for this. After all, we're only into chapter two! Maybe they just don't like the idea of having their "best pony" being killed. Rarity fans might not be be liking this right now. Uh, no offense, Rarity fans...
I'll be honest when I say I haven't read an MLP version of Final Destination, so I don't know how one can exactly pull it off well, but I think you've got the gist of it. Actually, I've seen maybe one Final Destination MLP version, but with *shudders* OCs. Seriously no point in that! It takes a whole lot of guts in writing to kill off your favorite ponies. Every. Single. One! And so morbidly, too; that's why, despite how I've seen the second and third, I've never liked these movies. Though the deaths afterwards are pretty darn creative. I'm curious as to how you'll pull off killing those who survived, because that's what made the movies--the gruesome deaths! ...Wow, maybe I should go into therapy. Anyway, I'll be keeping an eye on this, because I think it deserves at least a look at.
1067556 Thank you and don't worry, if you knew the deaths i have planned you would probably start recommending therapist for me.
also, Rarity Fans.....no hard feelings ok. All death orders and ponies who died in the crash were all based on hat draw. Sorry to anyone who hates this!
Pretty soon they are going to envy Rarity and Sweetie Bell.
that it?
1077374 of course not, i've still got alot to kill
1077881 can't wait
1078504 me either...thinking up some good stuff for ya so wait...its coming
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1083284 imma run away screaming now
1083681 Get back here
1083687 nu!
1083741 Ya
1083853 o shit imma get cupcaked
1083933.........
1084230 jk jk
1086570...u need help
1089987 ik i do >.>
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YES!!!! FINAL DESTINATION!!!!!!! Gosh I loved that movie....
Can't wait to see where this story goes!
1257044 thanks i have all my ideas for ironic deaths but right now writers block and school are making it hard to write
1258034 I've been there... only for me after a few weeks of writers block I'll have multiple stories piling up...
1262421 your preaching to the choir on multiple story pile ups dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
1264446 The trick is finishing at least one so the rest can be given more attention...
1266136 yeah...that's why im not putting any new ones out for a while after my one shot story this Friday so i can focus on getting further in the stories I already have out.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png
1266148 True... True... I currently have one big one planned, an many more small ones... (I feel kind of stupid right now due to the fact I still have no stories up... )
1267521 don't feel stupid.....true genius takes time so who knows...whatever your story is that you get out will probably incredibly awesome
1268503 Awwwww... thanks... I'm currently working on it right now so when it's done... pfft... who knows...
But anyway... again i can't wait to see where this story goes! Keep up the great work!
I'm about to watch final destination on YouTube
1439973nice
Please finish this story!
1745072 working on it.....really hard to post new chapters from my phone
God damn it im in suspense now...
2294596 Hehe that's the point ^^ . Also, next chapters coming out this weekend hopefully
2296057 HELL YEAH!!! Also your story inspired me to do a final destination of my own, completely different scenario from yours though.
2296058 hehehe wow I will keep an eye open foe that...plus if u need some death ideas I can definatly help out HEHEHEHEHEHEHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2296101 check my blog about and leave any comments on what deaths you'd like to see You will be given credit for helping out. Pinkie Pie needs to have more premonitions on them
First, it was the bridge collapse, then it was flight 180, then it was the road pileup, THEN it was the roller coaster, AND THEN it was a race track (We don't talk about that one) and now it's magical talking ponies on a train.
Seems interesting.