Supreme Human

by Connect-the-Pie

Season 1—Chapter 1--Show-n-Tell

Author's Note:

Oh um... hi well, this is my first story and well, i may or may not like typing the story out
so the rest will come out whenever.

Ok, came back to this story, and man was i new at this, didn't try to fit the pieces of paper that I was copying this story off of,(Which I wrote), and not at least try to make this chapter 1000 words. Ok well, lets revise this chapter and deleted the second one to try and fix this mess that i made.

Also, Rhyming with Zecora is not fun.
"rine? higone?" What are those words I made up?

Today is Show-n-Tell day at school. For this Show-n-Tell we needed to bring something from home from one of your favorite video game. I spent 2 years getting it done. Now I know what you're wandering, how did you spend 2 years getting it done when Show-n-Tell is today, and what is it? Well... my creation is all three ACUs from Supreme Commander (U.E.F., Aeon Illuminate,and Cybrans).

I started working on it 2 years ago, just because I wanted to, I built them small, but still big enough for me to get in and to push all the buttons. I built them using rare metals that are almost impossible to break.

Now, I am the last person to go . "Ok Mark, its your turn,"my teacher said, "'Show' us what you brought 'N' 'Tell' us about it." Now.. i know what you're thinking, how, the hell, did i hide 3 ACUs in a small room? Well... the Cybran ACU has the ability to cloak and it was active (don't ask).

I reached into my pocket to fish out a button to press and all three ACUs appeared seemingly out of nowhere. "Ok Mark, 'Tell' us about them."

-----Ok I'm gonna skip this part because i'm lazy. Basically, I 'Tell' the other students about them, like whats its made of and what it can do----

After Answering all question, I entered the Cybran ACU and that's when things went wrong. When i got in, the screen was glitching out and on the screen, i saw that the Aeon ACU was glowing/shining. It flashed and all went black.

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When I came to, I noticed that I was no longer in the class room. I was now in a forest so dense that I couldn't see the tree behind the one in front of me. Looking to my right, I saw the ACUs, "Meh" I said, and got into the Cybran one and it powered on. ACU ONLINE. ... What? Is that the little voice thing? Hello Commander. My name is QVI And I'm Here To Help You Operate Your Armored Command Unit, Or ACU. How on earth did you get here? I didn't program you! I don't even know how to! "Ok well," I started, "umm give me the statistics!" Everything Besides, Cannon And Builder Operational. POWER IS CRITICALLY LOW. MASS IS CRITICALLY LOW That's not good. "How do I obtain Mass and Power here?" I asked. SCANNING I heard a beeping sound. Scan Complete. ERROR. No Mass Deposits Found, I Suggest Building A Tech 1 Power Generator, Then To Build, A Mass Fabricator. "Yeah but, isn't the builder down?" I asked. Wait For Approximately FIVE Minuets For Mass And Power To Build Up. Your Amount Of Power And Mass Should Be At Top Right Of The Interface Along With The View From The Onboard Radar, Sonar. and Normal Veiw. Looking at the screen, I saw nothing but trees. Trees, and even more trees, I zoomed out to Strategic View and saw nothing but a grey area, which means the onboard radar instillation does not cover that area.

After waiting for seven and a half minuets, I was finally able to build the power generator. To Select The Build Radical, Press The Big Green Button On Your Left Side. Pressing said button, I saw the build thing, show up on the interface, moving to the power generator it was selected and a hologram of it showed up in front of me in the interface. I Suggest Placing Power Generator By That Building To The Right. Building? I didn't see a building. Zooming into the right, I actually saw the building in question. Oh ok, there is a building to the right. Moving the hologram behind the building and placing it there, the ACU began to automatically move there to build the generator. And when I got far enough from the other two ACUs, they began to follow me. ACU 1 & 2 Will Now Follow ACU 3 For Convenience. Yeah, for convenience.

Nearing the placed hologram, red flying things came out of the building cannon, and began to shoot red lasers, same with the main build cannon, but a bigger laser. When it was completed, I saw that the power level bar was no longer at critical. "Who goes making noise behind my hut that i don't know?" A voice? What on earth, is a person doing here, in a dense ass forest like this? On the View, I saw something that looked like a zebra, The Zebra Behind You Is Apparently The Owner Of This House, And Even Speaks English. Try To Communicate. Communicate... got it. Turning around, I saw that the zebra flinched, Probably not expecting me to even understand. "Hello." I said to the talking zebra. "My name is..." Hmmm maybe I should get a name for when I'm being a commander. The name I like from the game was 'TheContact' so I'll use that. "...TheContact. And I didn't mean to disturb you."

"Well hello TheContact, My name is Zecora,"She said, "I would welcome you inside and sip tea together, but I don't see anything for the tea to make 'contact' with. And your skin will make you hard to lift." She said, gesturing to the ACU.

"Oh this isn't my skin, It's just a suit." I explained. Don't Explain The Mechanisms Of The ACUs, Or How They Work. For Safety Reasons. Sounds reasonable. "Oh I'm sorry," Zecora said, "but this thing right here," she pointed to the power generator, "Is a disturbance, for me and the wildlife near."

"Oh sorry, but this is the best place for it for it will be out of sight, and where i'll remember its location." I explained. Even though that's a lie, for when it was done, the blip for it appeared on screen. "And I still need to build something else." Zecora began to think, then finally said, "Well fine, for the noise it make is not all that rine."

I whispered to QVI, "Is it ok if she sees the building Process?" It is ok. Good. Bringing back up the build wheel, I hovered over the Mass Fabricator, and a hologram appeared, moving the hologram beside the power generator, it was placed, and the same thing happened with the generator, the things came out of the builder. "Wow," Zecora said, "I didn't expect, for this, it was, not expected."
After 5 seconds, the fabricator, was finished. "Not to pry but, how much power does the generator produce? Just meaning to mareduce."

"Uhhh," I said, "How about you say QVI?" "The TECH 1 Power Generator Produces About 47 Kilotons Of Power Per Second," Zecora nearly fell on her face,"About 47 kilotons?!" She yelled, "Thats 100 times the amount needed to give the power usage of Manehatten the shuns!" "But," QVI continued, "For The Operations That ACUs Go On, They Need An Estimate Of About 20-37 Power Generators." I widen my eyes, as Zecora falls over. "About 20-37?! What in Celestia do you do that uses that much power or given?"
"Unfortunately, That Is Classified." Zecora picked herself backed up, "Well ok." She said. "I am scared about the other one so I will not asked. I will protect them from the forest, for here, the creatures are restless, and will probably find them as their meal."

"Thanks Zecora, but their is no need for protecting them," I said, "For they are made of metals, unbreakable for anything here."

"That may be true, but I will call that a rue." She said. "Now you begone, for I must prepare for the higone of the creatures anyway."

"Bye Zecora."

"Bye Contact."

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Commander, There Is A Strange Energy Source At The Edge Of The Radar Range. Looking at the screen, I saw a white dot at the top left corner of the interface, "Ok." I said, "What are we gonna do about it?" You Are Gonna Approach It With Caution For There Are Other Unkowns Around It. Looking back, yeah there were. I Recommend Heading There Now For More Power Is Good. "Yeah ok." I replied. "let's go." Heading in the direction of the dot, along with the other two ACUs I knew, I will have fun!

Comments

[Viper Pit]

Intresting

[fanreader999999]

Rush Fatboys

[Shattered_Moon]

*interested Bat sounds*

[Viper Pit]

my one problem is that this

-----Ok I'm gonna skip this part because i'm lazy. Basically, I 'Tell' the other students about them, like whats its made of and what it can do----

After Answering all question, I entered the Cybran ACU and that's when things went wrong. When i got in, the screen was glitching out and on the screen, i saw that the Aeon ACU was glowing/shining. It flashed and all went black.

would give those that never heard of Cybran ACU (Like myself) some information about them. Also about three I's need to be capitalized

[The Blue EM2]

Faved purely because it's Supreme Commander.

[The Blue EM2]

Hello Commander. My name is QVA

Do you mean QAI, by any chance?

[Horrible_Writer]

Supreme commander 2 is way better

[Black_Knight]

Ok , I clicked purely because it's Supreme Commander, but oh boy the writing. I'm giving it a pass since you seem pretty new at writing and there isn't glaring grammar mistakes. Aside from minuets (2x) who should be written as minutes.

Also, if you really like to play Forged Alliance, register your Supreme Commander game key, I assume you have the windows live CD game, into your Steam library, you'll receive FA for free.

[Connect-the-Pie]

9648813
thats probably it

[Connect-the-Pie]

9648928
I played the games on Xbox360

[Connect-the-Pie]

9648780
The story was a mess, I had to do something,

I will give more info later, I already have an idea for how and when if it works

[Viper Pit]

9649033
you see I have no idea what you mean by evolving into the second because I don't have any information about the first one

[Resadur164]

well, then if there is no command limit (how many units can be on the battlefield at once)
then just go mass air power, cause they kill everything and are very easy to make factories for, cause they go unrestricted in any direction and no need for spacing (unless you want shields that aren't building add-ons or power plants with the repair arm upgrade)

[Mist_Chaser]

If you have the knowhow to build mechs and the resources to get hard to obtain (possibly military strength) alloys to build them with, it is highly unlikely that you wouldn't have skipped a bunch of grades and are already looking at applying to college. (You would also probably be under surveillance by either the military or the government for purchasing those materials.)

[Connect-the-Pie]

Ok ok, i know i left a lot of plot holes in this story, but the first part was my first attempt at writing a story, and I didn’t feel like rewriting it

[The Blue EM2]

9648928
Good point. FA is a pretty crucial part of the SupCom timeline.

[The Blue EM2]

9649028
Only Cybran ACUs can interface with QAI (I can't remember off the top of my head what the UEF and Aeon ones are called).

[Connect-the-Pie]

9649794
Well I got all three.
please dont ask how or why

[The Blue EM2]

9650709
Sorry, I meant the faction AIs.

[Connect-the-Pie]

9649792
The Seraphim will Not be apart of this story

[The Blue EM2]

9650715
Interesting choice, given that part of the war is a big part of the background for SupCom 2.

[Connect-the-Pie]

9650722
I know, all I really know about the Seraphim is that they were an alien race that sort of made the Aeon Illuminate, and made that space thingy from SupCom 2 that Commander Gauge commandeered which I forgot was it’s called, it was something beginning with A, correct me if other wise, it’s been a while.
But yeah anyway this is not a retailing of the games, it is just me being teleported by the Aeon ACU to an unknown world, things will not be accurate, for, their will be no commander Maddox, Coleman, Arnold,(?) Kael, or any one else, thats for me to decide. I also don’t know much of SupCom lore either

[The Blue EM2]

9651486
Shiva Prime predates the Seraphim.

[Connect-the-Pie]

9651657
“Chicken-egg”
Brackman

[The Blue EM2]

9651943
And, according to Gauge, quite shiny.

[Connect-the-Pie]

9651946
Hehe yeah

[The Blue EM2]

9652156
This story has inspired me to pull Supreme Commander out of storage and start playing it again.

[Connect-the-Pie]

9652168
Yeah, I mean I completed SupCom 2 on my older 360
Also later, I will play them again

[The Blue EM2]

9652190
Yep. Memories...

[Connect-the-Pie]

9649076
When I play, I usually build my defenses up before I begin to make too many units.

[Resadur164]

9652433
same, but I'm saying for when a battle is to come the best answer is air power as the unrivaled mastery of the air results in wins, the only reasons I don't do that in the games is because it's better (to me at least) to go artillery (and if UEF going the Noah cannon from the second game) and go nuclear weapons (and nuclear defense at least one right next to where your commander is going to spend most of the time at) and the unit cap, in forged alliance I love upgrading the UEF commander with the back missiles and upgrading it again so its a nuclear missile

(*yes I understand you have not played the other two games I just listed a few interesting facts from them*)

[Connect-the-Pie]

9652448
I played both SupCom 1 and 2. I have not played Forged Alliance
I usually for the first one, get things ready, with navel, land, and air, with some Experimental, if I'm lucky. The second one, I usually nearly the first thing i do is build the Nuclear Defence silo, next is building the Space Temple and the Loyalty Gun (I like playing as the Illuminant) . for units, I usually wait to until i can build th experimental units, i afterwards build other units to defend them

[LEGION55]

QVA(or QVW

QAI.

[Connect-the-Pie]

9720860
thank you