The Dragon Lord Legacy
The Young are in Pain
Spike had watched from outside the pink bubble as Celestia, Luna, Cadance, Shinning along Zynthia and Eliyinsa spoke, though it looked like all of them were visibly tired. Sadness etched across their faces, with an occasional tears leaving their eyes, especially his pony mother and his dragon mother. They gave occasional glances towards him or used him as references.
Twilight and Ember were either side of him, staying close to him, holding each side of his arm. He was… conflicted to say, terrified at the implications of what was being spoken of him, saddened that his mothers, all three of them were affected by this but worst of all, torn at the fact that he may not like what he was about to be told.
His origins had four powerful creatures crest fallen and it was directed towards him. His claws have been squeezing Twilight’s hoof and Ember’s palm tightly. Both could feel his heart beating fast, to the point where it looked like he was about to hyperventilate. His own eyes moistened every time he thought that any of his mothers would fall over from sheer shock or sadness on the accounts of new information they told one another.
He was so focused on them, that anything spoken or said to him by Ember or Twilight didn’t register in his mind. He only knew that they were by his side in case of anything.
What seemed like an eternity later, Shinning's pink shield lowered and all let out sighes, though it was a bitterment of what was to come. Spike’s breath hitched, as he felt the eyes of three females locked their pained eyes at him. His heart began to beat faster now, beating at an incredibly fast rate, that his head started to feel light.
It was Eliyinsa who did a slow and cautious walk towards him, The others followed right after with each step towards him made Spike’s heart beat with dredd now, the cold feeling creeping up his spines. Celestia and Zynthia both pointed flicked their heads to the sides, to Twilight and Ember to move away.
Both hesitated, fearing the repercussions but slowly backed away. Spike felt his physical and perhaps emotional support slipping away, as this his mind. His mother now stood before him, looking down at him with sad violet eyes, both seemed to have lost their luster.
She then slowly laid on her belly, spreading her forepaws forwards and to either side of him until she was laying down. Her head lowered to meet his emerald eyes, tears threatening to spill.
“M-M-Mother?” he hiccuped, fear gripping his voice. “W-What’s happening?”
Oh Draco, what was he about to be told? Zynthia moved to the other side, blocking the views from the others, also lying down but behind him. The group of ponies and dragons were heartfelt for him, as if they were about to see the one they cared for, be changed again. Shinning and Cadance moved the others away from them, pushing the distance between his loved ones. Ember stayed, allowed by Zynthia but it was only to keep his second half close in case of anything.
They didn't want anything to befallen their son again.
Luna and Celestia stood between the two large dragons, sitting on their flanks, both sharing the same looks as his mother. Spike turned to his first mother, Celestia, whom looked different. The once regal and proud ruler of Equestria, looked drained and tired, with small bags under her eyes. Even though Luna was only part of his life for a year or so, to see one as strong her also looking down was heart wrenching.
“Spike.” The word came out heavy, like if it weighed a ton. He turned back towards his mother. She was breathing in and breathing softly, as if she is ready to sleep now, emotionally tired to the point of physical exhaustion. She opened her mouth, trying to find words, but just a soundless sigh left her and she looked down and away, closing her eyes.
He knew this was difficult, but he never saw someone this down beat. “Spike.” He turned to Celestia, whom seemed to be a bit stronger than his mother. “We just had a talk about you.” She paused and swallowed some saliva. “And we have just made a connection to where you came from and... perhaps how you have come to be."
He didn’t speak, he didn’t dare speak. Just like them, he felt like he couldn’t speak without breaking down and just begging them to spill it. He just gave a shaky nod.
Celestia continued. “It has come to our understanding that, when it has come down to your egg, where it came from and why, has been answered.” A single tear shed from Celestia. “And because this has come up, I had to reveal a secret to your mother that I have kept for twenty years.”
Spike’s eyes went wide and he felt haunted, more so that Celestia just acknowledged that Eliyinsa was his mother more so than herself. Or... at least she knew something else with it.
Zynthia decided to add in her own side. “You already know of how we handle things differently at home then here, Spike,” she began, his focus turning towards her. “We dragons never abandoned or leave our eggs, unless to be a total heartless monster. 'Egg-breakers' are dragons we would dare not associate with or do well within our knowledge and rules that we deal with them." A small growl left her but it turned into a hissful sigh. "Your case, it was… different. You were left behind twenty years ago by your mother. Normally, dragons who are found abandoning their eggs or leave them, are to be treated as an outcast and removed from dragon society completely. They must leave their eggs in the pits where they could be adopted by other dragons or be given to a dragon who would willingly take the egg.” She shook her head. “I am not sure where this lies in.”
“W-Wha… What are you trying to tell me?” he asked, sadness and turmoil was making his mind hurt and his stomach was in knots. “I know... that I was abandoned or l-l-left behind but...?” He swallowed, trying to regain his voice. “T-that my m-mother… left me to die?” He stopped and looked towards Eliyinsa.
She had remained quiet this entire time. As she heard the silence, she opened her eyes and he stared at something in there that spoke volumes. They were just waiting to tell him but… they were not sure themselves how to. Regaining her ability to speak, she inhaled deeply, held the breath for a moment before softly releasing, letting her breath wash over him.
Speaking at easily as she could, even though her voice would crack, she looked at him with steady violet eyes.
“My son, my beautiful and wonderful son.” She leaned in, brushing her snout on him, taking in his scent and his scales on her own. Spike pushed back, trying to feel her warmth and comfort. There was warmth but the comfort was left hanging as she pulled away. “What has been discussed between us is now over. Now is the time to act on what we discussed and what we must tell you.” She raised her head above him and looked down at him.
She was not looking at him like a mother was looking at her hatchling or drake. She was looking at him now as a stranger, though there was still softness and care in those eyes. Zynthia also raised her head, while Luna and Celestia stood up. Now he was surrounded by four towering figures, as if they were about to pass judgement onto him.
“The fear of repercussions from this is what terrifies us all Spike. Knowing of your past may or may not affect you, but we are wary that this has a significant outcome in the future, especially yours. But it is up to you to decide whether you want to know this or not. No one here, will decide for you, none of us will hide the truth from you if you ask and no one will hold you responsible for your reactions.” The seriousness that left her had him shaking now, remembering back when he was in the trials, only this time, he felt like the trials would be cake walk compared to what was to be told to him. "We once held on to many secrets, daring that we would die with them and unfortunately... that is no longer the case. With me, with Zynthia, with your pony mother here, or with anyone else."
She took in a deep, unsteady breath and spoke like the Elder she was, the Advisor role that she gained and earned. Violet eyes lit up. “Spike, as your mother, as your guardian and as the emerald in my heart, I ask this of you…” Spike gulped, his heart hammering against his chest. “Do you wish to know of your origins? Do you wish to know of who you are, where you come from and what is the truth of your real mother? Or do you wish to forsake this, carry on with your life?” He was about to answer but she stopped him.
“Know this, no matter your choices, no matter what you ask, we as in all of us that surround you here and now, will still love and care for you. That even if you know the truth, we will still hold you with our hearts. All of us, your pony family and your dragon family.
"However, knowing the truth may or may not ease your pain of what is your past and why things happened the way they did. You may even find some closure and further history from it or it might dig in deep the wound that you have in your heart already and perhaps... make it worse.” She stopped and nodded to each of the surrounding four figures around him. “They know of it, piecing all of it together, but now it is up to you. It is up to you if you want the truth. No more secrets, no more lies."
"The choice is yours.”
Man, your stories here on this site coming to an end is a dreadful day. i love your Spike centered stories.
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Dont worry i have plenty of Spike stories to come. Some will end but others will start and thanks for tuning in.
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Oh boy, thats a true relief. glad to hear.
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Like the death likes me rough
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Yep... which will be done soon... hopefully...
So will this and death likes me rough be the end of the spike stories along with the spember stories
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Not really, not for awhile at least. Just no more pony based or centered stories
I'd say the less known about a bad thing is better.
I vote no
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Nice, thank you for sharing
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Bad may not always be the worst thing because you can become stronger from it.
Here is how l see the poll
the first chosen is what spike in the show and in the story would do think about is family and friends then himself
With the second chosen is what the read of the story what to know and after what happened-to him at the end of the first part l do not what to see him go though again
l what to know what happened in spike past too but not if it destroyed the dragon l care about
And with the last chance it get painful to think about
Remember what happened when he found out what is mother’s were doing to him and we all know spike would not what is friends and family live like that
Those are guess my own thought
So please vote the way you think
And we all see what happened next
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A choice that can hurt, cure, or affect us, in ways emotionally what can be handled. Its these characters and challenges that make us love or hate them all the more. Its these options that show us what may happen or what may never be for them and hope for a satisfying outcome
I'm curious however when/if this prequel will come out. Say the first option wins, does that mean we have to wait awhile after this story is completed before we get it? Because I really want to know what you've come up with for his origins now
Okay... what can I say about this poll that makes any sense? Hmmm... nothing comes to mind other than a question. Why only 3 horrible choices and not more reasonable ones? The choices are all unacceptable as are their outcomes when you take the time to sit down and really think about it. Spike should be allowed to learn the truth of his origins but not like this. None of these choices provide a logical, realistic or respectful way forward for Spike to learn that truth. I understand that with the truth comes pain and some suffering. That is the way of the world that is reasonable to a certain degree but I also believe that Spike is strong enough to handle it.
He has endured so much already but it is past time for him to learn where he came from otherwise this whole storyline you wrote was for nothing. I am sorry, Little Draco, but I can't vote because the choices are all unacceptable to me. You literally have created a no win scenario for Spike and he deserves better than these insulting choices. He deserves a fourth option... another path forward that is unexpected and threads the eye of the needle. Otherwise, he will always be a prisoner trapped in the present with no way forward... no future. He will never be a whole dragon that is free to chart his own path and write his own destiny. How can he with this unresolved secret hanging over him like a sword of Damocles that has yet to fall. Sorry if I make this sound so dramatic but Spike is my favorite character in MLP and I only wish the best for him because he not only deserves it... he has earned it.
If Spike is to become a Guardian of the Dragon Lands at Ember's side then he needs closure. He needs to put this sad, painful chapter of his life's story to bed and move on. The old saying about the truth will set you free applies here. He deserves to be free. Little Draco, again I am sorry but I respectfully disagree with your current poll and ask that you come up with something else that is more respectful of Spike himself as a character.
P.S. don't delete my comment just because I voiced my honest opinion about the limits of your flawed poll.
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While I understand your opnion, the poll was really more of something to add a mix to the story. i apperciate your time to explain the reason, but I won't change anything on it. Maybe it might not be the best one, but my feelings are that Spike as a character on the show never really got the development he deserved, here this was to see how people wished he could have changed or how he could have become something else.
I thank you for your honest words.
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it will most likely start and finish with the ending of the series, though I want to finish it as the ending on the positive choice, could be viewed as a flashback by his family and those who know of it.
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Actually, with all due respect, I really wonder if you understand my opinion on your poll. Allow me to explain a few things about myself. I, like you, also feel that Spike was done dirty by the show writers and staff. They had nine seasons to explore his backstory and they squandered all that time on doing multiple repetitive stories on the main six. There were so many episodes that Spike was cut from due to the writers having a hard time trying to make the plot work around his presence. In the end, the writers decided to make the work easier on themselves by cutting Spike out. However, by doing that they actual hurt the show in the long run.
The show writers did the same to the gryphons and the other non-pony races as well so in the end I stopped watching the show for the ponies. Anyway, I feel like your poll still does Spike dirty by treating him like he has no self respect for himself. Your series made it abundantly clear to me that Spike viewed himself as not being important and that just seems out of character to me. Spike in the show had his moments of low self esteem but I feel they never went so far as to show him doubting his own self worth. Being humble is one thing but not seeing oneself as worthy of others respect is quite disturbing. Spike's change in your stories feels great at times and yet off as he seems like he gained very little insight into himself. Something about Spike seems to be missing and that is his self confidence. He is still snarky and that is one trait I love about him. However, you said that you intended to address Spike's origin story with this series of stories and yet now you have crafted this strange poll that makes me doubt everything about the final objective of this series. I must admit that the poll choices all annoy me as much as they confuse me.
Well I have said all I intend to say on the matter, Its your story not mine and in the end it is up to you to decide what to do. I just hope that Spike's story will end happily...
Okay, I know that poll is old, but I'm sorry, all those choices are fucking terrible.
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Yeah so im repeatedly reminded of, so no more polls in the future