Hum, the writing still need work, but you are off on a very good start, I love sex parasites manipulating the hosts impulses, not our right mind control, and urges them t do unusual stuff for no apparent reasons. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
9399371 Unfortunately I have to strike a balance between quality and quantity because I write for a living, and I need to make enough to eat. If I put the price up, I would not get enough customers, and if I put the quality up anyway, I would not do enough to eat.
Butterfly's eyes flew wide and she moved over to the downed rabbit with a cry of shock. She picked the poor creature up in her hooves and rushed through into the living room, placing the poor bunny down on the table.
9401835 Nope, it was most certainly butterfly. A giant butterfly pony that cares immensely for animals and appeared only for this scene and is never seen or mentioned again.
This is off to a good start. I'm always wanting to see more parasite mind control so this scratches a very specific niche of mine. Looking forward to more chapters.
Flutterfly's eyes flew wide and she moved over to the downed rabbit with a cry of shock. She picked the poor creature up in her hooves and rushed through into the living room, placing the poor bunny down on the table.
Going from what was said in the description I need to know where you are to hit you and where do you want hit?
9385419
Beat me daddy <3
But for real, it's an English expression. I know you were joking, but I'm going to inform you of that anyway.
9385525
Мне очень жаль, потому что вы видите, английский - мой первый язык, и он все еще такой сложный.
Hot stuff! *eagerly await more*
Hum, the writing still need work, but you are off on a very good start, I love sex parasites manipulating the hosts impulses, not our right mind control, and urges them t do unusual stuff for no apparent reasons. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
9399371
Unfortunately I have to strike a balance between quality and quantity because I write for a living, and I need to make enough to eat. If I put the price up, I would not get enough customers, and if I put the quality up anyway, I would not do enough to eat.
Fluttershy, not Butterfly!
9401835
Nope, it was most certainly butterfly. A giant butterfly pony that cares immensely for animals and appeared only for this scene and is never seen or mentioned again.
This is off to a good start. I'm always wanting to see more parasite mind control so this scratches a very specific niche of mine. Looking forward to more chapters.
9467710
More chapters soon hopefully! Just been going slow because of issues.
"Flutterfly's"
"Flutterfly's"
"Flutterfly's"
"Flutterfly's!!!!"
Wait WHAT!?!?!
9788665
That was totally intentional. For that one paragraph she turned into a giant fly and then turned back right after.