Thunderlane has been hiding something every night. But some pony else has been hiding a lot more. (ABDL Themes)
Oh this is a great story so far, at first I thought it was just something silly, then there was an interesting introspection to it then with the mare a mystery which got me very intrigued; I loved it, can't wait to see the next chapter. keep it up.
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Aside from calling Thunderlane "Thunderwing" a few times, this is a good start.
In his hand was an adult diaper.
Shouldn't it be "Hoof" instead?
Oh this is a great story so far, at first I thought it was just something silly, then there was an interesting introspection to it then with the mare a mystery which got me very intrigued; I loved it, can't wait to see the next chapter. keep it up.
If you want a cover art PM me I could cut you a deal for a commission.
https://www.deviantart.com/amalgamzaku
Aside from calling Thunderlane "Thunderwing" a few times, this is a good start.
Shouldn't it be "Hoof" instead?