Okay I just wanna ask, does putting the images in your story is really necessary? Because for me is really distracting, not to mention that it doesn't let me picture the scenes in my mind. I would suggest you to take off those images.
9430621 dude I'm only gonna say this only once leave.. him.. the.. fuck.. ALONE!!! if you don't like the images then kindly leave it's his story not yours
it's this kind of suggestion that pisses me off to no ends about your kind of types thinking they have the right to make demands from honest to good authors who just want to write for the enjoyment of others and them.
alot of good displaced and non displaced stories will have images in them so if you don't like stories that have them then don't read or comment
also here's some advice from my douche bag of a twin brother that he gave to me (I'll admit how he said it is really rude but was still true and a fact)
Tough Shit life's not always gonna give you everything you want
(I think at that time before he said that it was due to me trying to get him to I think Pre-order a game for me Idk really remember since it was years ago and my memory is foggy at best at the time of that event)
9430621 This is his story not yours if you want to criticize something for having pictures in it then go make your own story and see how hard it is to actually write something
9433654 that i can vouch on and how hard it is to write -.- cause i had BP take a look at my first displaced story that's over 2k and is not submitted yet and i can safely say writing is bloody hard DX
“Ha that thing a child don't make me laugh the two of you are monsters. We're going lock the two of you up.” eleven guards in total, eight unicorns, four Pegasus. “Maybe kill YOU two before your so call court date and make it LOOK like you two kill ourselves.”
Also, this Is a military force, not a bunch of assholes. They're supposed take anything that they deem a threat to their country/kingdom seriously.
Thank you so much 🤗
I am sure the ponies aren't going to get worried when the mc summons the S.H.I.E.L.D carrier (vehicle)...
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He'd have to build it.
Okay I just wanna ask, does putting the images in your story is really necessary? Because for me is really distracting, not to mention that it doesn't let me picture the scenes in my mind. I would suggest you to take off those images.
9430621
dude I'm only gonna say this only once leave.. him.. the.. fuck.. ALONE!!! if you don't like the images then kindly leave it's his story not yours
it's this kind of suggestion that pisses me off to no ends about your kind of types thinking they have the right to make demands from honest to good authors who just want to write for the enjoyment of others and them.
alot of good displaced and non displaced stories will have images in them so if you don't like stories that have them then don't read or comment
also here's some advice from my douche bag of a twin brother that he gave to me (I'll admit how he said it is really rude but was still true and a fact)
(I think at that time before he said that it was due to me trying to get him to I think Pre-order a game for me Idk really remember since it was years ago and my memory is foggy at best at the time of that event)
9430621
This is his story not yours if you want to criticize something for having pictures in it then go make your own story and see how hard it is to actually write something
Jeez, looks like someone just had a bad day...
9433654
that i can vouch on and how hard it is to write -.- cause i had BP take a look at my first displaced story that's over 2k and is not submitted yet and i can safely say writing is bloody hard DX
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
9503554
Working on it now
Slow down on the detailing. I'm happy of the m.c. abilities you gave him.
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Sorry I got some complaints about it so
Also, this Is a military force, not a bunch of assholes. They're supposed take anything that they deem a threat to their country/kingdom seriously.
This was a epic battle/training chapter,I hope the princesses show up soon.