Shining Armor must make a heavy sacrifice for the future of Equestria.
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This is a extreme story. And I don't honestly find it 'sexy' for the most part. I DO find the writing of these extremes and how detailed and interesting they are brought to life to be a draw to this story. I am sad to see where this Sparity ended up. But I did LOVE how you wrote their scene and moment and only hope we get to see more in later or their own stories. Spike being the stud in Rarity's close group just seems so fitting for the element of Generosity lol. And to be frank Shy SOOOO seem like the type to have some private fun with her furry friends lol. I am interested in seeing where this story will go and what else you have in the wings to come out.
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Thank you! Yeah, originally I intended to make this a much lighter fic, but I've just let it take me wherever my mind led. I admittedly have some pretty extreme fetishes, but I like vanilla/romantic stuff too, so I've tried to bounce a bit between those with each chapter. Pretty surprised at how dark it went over time myself.
Poor Rarity gets abused a lot in my fics despite being my favorite character, haha. At least Spike gets to be pretty badass here, even if he's not remotely himself anymore! Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts on the story so far!
Will this story have any m/f sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?
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Np lol it does seem you like to rough up Rarity in your stories for someone who likes her but I can't blame you. Seeing a character go through tough challenges can be part of their charm. But as someone who does so good with the Romance I can't wait to see you do one with Rarity *cough* Sparity *cough* lol, one day where they are the focus of the story.
Honestly in this story I really REALLY hope it is Rarity that puts Spike down for good if it comes to it. I think she is the one that loves him the most and knows who he truly is and knows he would NEVER want to hurt ponies and creatures like this and if he would want anyone to set him free it would be his snowflake.
Honestly I couldn't help but think of how you could do a amazing job with a story idea I have had buzzing in my head. But that might be a pipe dream to see you bring it to life lol.
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Think there have been a scant few, although admittedly I tend to prefer sex scenes where the male is the dom. From what I recall The Mare Who Sold The World has Starlight on top of Sunburst, although a futa Trixie makes a sandwich of her, Nocturnal Emissions has a scene where a couple of succubi mares take advantage of him while he sleeps if that counts?, and Exquisite Corpse has Fleur dominating Flash Sentry, though they switch positions eventually.
Originally I had plans for a chapter where Applejack dominates Shining Armor but scrapped it because it didn't fit in well with here the fic headed. I scrapped a scene with Pinkamena taking advantage of Shining Armor in an asylum for similar reasons.
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I'd definitely like to write Rarity some more. Unfortunately like you said she's not the main focus of this fic so I've tried not to force her into the story (Much as I sometimes want to!), and tried to make sure Shining/Sunset/Trixie/the villain were the main plot movers for the most part. I definitely agree that Spike would want her to be the one to stop him, especially after they became lovers in this fic! Can't promise anything about what fic I write next, but I'm always willing to listen to ideas, even if I might not end up using them.
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I just always had a idea of a story where Rarity turns down/doesn't ever comment on Spike's feelings for her. She ends up getting married and moving away. Years later, like 10 or 15 so, Rarity is still married and with a child. Through work or something else she ends up running into and having to work along side Spike who she hasn't seen in years. He has grown much bigger and now stand her equal. As they work together she remember just how charming and caring he is. Long story short it leads to the two of them sleeping together. And no matter how much Rarity want to think of it as a one time mistake she can't help but keep wanting to go back and see him. It would be a story of lost true love returning, but now it is also a taboo love that all would frown on.
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I like your story idea. While I can't make any promises (Still not entirely sure when this fic will be finished and it's taken lots of work) I'll definitely keep it in mind as a possibility!
Darkness.
Interesting.
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Thought it was cool to include the Four Horsemen!