Shining Armor must make a heavy sacrifice for the future of Equestria.
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When I saw the title I admit I perked up as I thought it might be a reference to the old sega games. Reread the title and was hit with vague disappointment.
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It is a reference to Shining Force: The Legacy of Great Intention, but the story is only vaguely related. It's mostly just a silly pun like a lot of the chapter titles. Shining Armor does eventually get promoted to a Paladin with his own army, though! Oldschool Sega rules!
This was interesting for sure. I like that Spike died for a reason and he at least saved alot of people yet again by taking out something that could have destroyed all his friends. I get why Rarity wasn't a full mess that Spiked died, even if she is still really hurt from it, to her the Spike she loved was already gone. This was what was left, the small part of him that couldn't be destroyed and she would be there for that part. She want him to find peace at least. Honestly the only thing I found to be funny was that Shinning was still saw as this great guy and the driving force in everything. It might be just from where I came really into the story. But to me it seems like he played a really small part in really all the end here. The mares did like all the work and fought to end this, he didn't even end any of the real threats, Trixie and Spike did that. It was just funny to me to see that. But great story, I can't wait to see the final chapter and I am really eager to see what your next work will be.
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Thank you! Yeah, while Shining is a brave and strong warrior, I think of him more as a status symbol here; Sunset and his lieutenants actually did most of the work in the background, while he was a face for others to rally under. He did at least get to kill War, even if he wouldn't have won without help from Flash Sentry/Fleur weakening him before Sunset gave him an opening to finish him off.
Glad I could give Spike a worthy end too. Debated a lot over the story how to tie his subplot up but recovering and settling down with Rarity would've felt like too much of a cop out. At least he died a hero and Rarity may find love again someday.
May have to take a break once this story's complete since it sapped me quite a bit, but I'll probably do something much lighter (And definitely short!) next time!
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Nice. Since he can use magic that makes him the second paladin with an MP bar.
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Good point!
OOF! Now the mane 7 is officially dead, the mane 7 from the human dimension at least.
Sad moments, is this the moment the Necronomicon begins to shape the foal? Cause I have the doc ready
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Yes to all that! Really pleased with how the climax turned out!
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Yeah, I still feel this reminds me of Sailor Moon and Sailor Galaxia.
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I do like Sailor Moon.