Not a bad story at all! Personally, I don’t feel like the ABDL mixes well with this story but I’m definitely keeping an open mind and I plan to stick around for the rest of this. Who knows, the rest of the story might change my thoughts. I really like how the mothers are getting a chance to be in the spotlight since it’s doesn't happen often.
Nice pacing in this story. It's pretty clever seeing how the 'Mom 6' and 'Dad 6' play their own parts. I can't recall a time when the parents were ever considered their own unique band. So this was definitely a treat.
The moments between Dashie and her mom are definitely precious. This is certainly the focal point of our story. What will come next will certainly be interesting.
Just then, the sound of hoof steps coming toward them reached their ears, and they all turned to see Hondo Flanks, Igneous Rock Pie, Mr. Shy, Bright Mac, Night Light, and Bow Hothoof coming toward them.
Wait, what? What are they all doing here? How did they find them? How did they know they were in trouble?
On an unrelated note, why aren't the Crusaders involved in this story?
Twilight stepped up and whispered, “The Castle.” Bow nodded, scooping up his wife. “Ready now? Here we go, on the count of free. One, two, free.” He said. Bow took off, and Rainbow squealed happily for the first time since her mother passed out. She giggled all the way to the castle.
Why didn't Twilight just teleport them to the castle instead of them insisting on flying there? Teleporting them would have been so much easier.
9291351 Twilight does teleport them almost immediately after, but I think she was a bit shocked to think that rationally. Certainly Bow wasn't thinking rationally. He was a man on a mission to save his wife, and he was going to do it by any means necessary. He figured getting them there by flight was faster. He did not think of teleporting. He really should have. But, the flight did give Rainbow the chance to calm down. I think maybe he had that in mind when he decided to fly too.
“Dashie, don’t cry honey, don’t get the wrong idea. Mama’s too sweepy to hear you screaming in her ear. That’s why you can’t get her to wake.” He explained.
“Ready now? Here we go, on the count of free. One, two, free.” He said.
i like the idea but the abdl just ruins it for me sorry
Not a bad story at all!
Personally, I don’t feel like the ABDL mixes well with this story but I’m definitely keeping an open mind and I plan to stick around for the rest of this. Who knows, the rest of the story might change my thoughts.
I really like how the mothers are getting a chance to be in the spotlight since it’s doesn't happen often.
Overall, I’m interested to see where it goes.
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Truthfully, I've only filed it to Read Later. Catching up with other fics and busy with work.
Nice pacing in this story. It's pretty clever seeing how the 'Mom 6' and 'Dad 6' play their own parts. I can't recall a time when the parents were ever considered their own unique band. So this was definitely a treat.
The moments between Dashie and her mom are definitely precious. This is certainly the focal point of our story. What will come next will certainly be interesting.
Wait, what? What are they all doing here? How did they find them? How did they know they were in trouble?
On an unrelated note, why aren't the Crusaders involved in this story?
Why didn't Twilight just teleport them to the castle instead of them insisting on flying there? Teleporting them would have been so much easier.
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Twilight does teleport them almost immediately after, but I think she was a bit shocked to think that rationally. Certainly Bow wasn't thinking rationally. He was a man on a mission to save his wife, and he was going to do it by any means necessary. He figured getting them there by flight was faster. He did not think of teleporting. He really should have. But, the flight did give Rainbow the chance to calm down. I think maybe he had that in mind when he decided to fly too.
97 bonnie and clyde reference?