Nice chapter. It goes a step further in establishing the play date that is ahead. I also like how you managed to bring parts of each character's element in to show how they are supportive of their friend.
Rarity's line on how Dashie is loyal to her friends and her friends are loyal to her was certainly touching. Hit the mark perfectly.
You did a great job with Spike and his reaction. He'd definitely be on board to see Twilight, for real, relax.
As a side note, I thank you for checking out the maternal tales I developed for Spike and Twilight. I really wanted to make Spike less of an assistant / friend and more of a brother / son. Make him feel like real family.
Aw, does that mean that Spike won't join in the day of play and relaxation? That's kind of disappointing. Maybe he'll see how much fun they're having and want to join in.
Nice chapter. It goes a step further in establishing the play date that is ahead. I also like how you managed to bring parts of each character's element in to show how they are supportive of their friend.
Rarity's line on how Dashie is loyal to her friends and her friends are loyal to her was certainly touching. Hit the mark perfectly.
You did a great job with Spike and his reaction. He'd definitely be on board to see Twilight, for real, relax.
As a side note, I thank you for checking out the maternal tales I developed for Spike and Twilight. I really wanted to make Spike less of an assistant / friend and more of a brother / son. Make him feel like real family.
Aw, does that mean that Spike won't join in the day of play and relaxation? That's kind of disappointing. Maybe he'll see how much fun they're having and want to join in.
adorableness off the charts