Kind of surprised we went from ‘entertain Inari and increase her following as an accidental side mission’, to ‘you’re a god, now get followers’. Here’s hoping it doesn’t take 2 more years for the next chapter!
If I could change my species permanently, I would choose what this story’s main character has become with out being a god. Why not a god?... Simple; I LOVE BEING A DEMON!!!!!!!!
If you are reading this then you survived getting punted across the multiverse congratulations. And if you aren’t running around screaming like your ass is on fire, good, that means that the modifications I made to your head worked.
So basic rundown of what happened to you. I chose you to go to another world and give it a swift kick in the ass. I’m sure as you explore you will find out the reason why. You have been turned into a nine tailed fox as I’m sure you’ve already noticed.
You have all of the abilities of a normal kitsune with a few more on the side. Such as the ability to use all forms of magic. Next to this letter there is a bag, in that bag are a few magical items. A sake bottle that never runs out and never breaks. a pair of chopsticks that can turn into a spear. And finally, the last is a book that is linked to your book store so you can read every book in your store from it, also the bag is a bag of holding.
Your god Inari
PS. You’re a god now, deal with it.
i find this last part to be utterly hilarious. the rest of this just seems random, which matches the type of od it is that did it so well played and researched. my only question is why with a kiss?
my last of this comment is that twilight would KILL for that book.
Not sure if it was deliberate or not, but to my understanding the whole 'day like any other' refers to your own experience. So if someone has a habit of going to the library and they decide to do that then it'd be like any other day. In the case of talking of other people, it would be starting the day like anyone/everyone else. So... Didnt get to the bookstore. I find it pretty funny that the example I used was a library. And I faintly recall something about kitsune changing colors from red with acquiring their tails. Do remember they carry a little orb thats like their soul or mana core or something like that. Though, I suppose not many really go by the legends word for word in books, theatre, and games.
(decided ill reread this story cause it is that good)
Looking up with a startled expression I managed to meet the eyes of the fox before a pair of lips met mine. My eyes widened in shock, I was being kissed by a kitsune. Wait why was it getting dark. The last thing I saw before I fell into darkness was a pleased smirk on the fox’s lips as it pushed a letter onto my chest.
WHAT A GREAT WAY TO DIE :D
Drinks taken from sake bottle: 1 swig (only counting drinks from the ever filling bottle)
Did that fox give me ifenent alcohol, starts to dump it in my mouth because to dump it on the ground is a insult. After an hour I stop before I fall on my ass an shout all is forgiven to the sky. That fox did not have to kiss me, just show me this glass and I would have jumped through that portal no question asked
Seems like a lot of power to just dump on a guy. Generally, good power fantasy stories have the mc work up to that sort of thing. I'm also pretty sure kitsunes are supposed to gain tails from accomplishing things, so it probably would have been better to start off with just one or two tails. It seems pretty gary stu-ish to me right now.
Good chapter. I hope you can nail everyponies reaction to him
A great start just like the other one and i love the ps^_^
That last line has some issues.
So far this is even better than the first.
Kind of surprised we went from ‘entertain Inari and increase her following as an accidental side mission’, to ‘you’re a god, now get followers’. Here’s hoping it doesn’t take 2 more years for the next chapter!
Allrighty then. Let's see this version goes . And that how much sake will get drunk in total.
I’m already liking this
If I could change my species permanently, I would choose what this story’s main character has become with out being a god. Why not a god?... Simple; I LOVE BEING A DEMON!!!!!!!!
Yo yo yo please continue this. Or I will snap Infinity Gauntlet. Zoinks Scooby
i find this last part to be utterly hilarious. the rest of this just seems random, which matches the type of od it is that did it so well played and researched. my only question is why with a kiss?
my last of this comment is that twilight would KILL for that book.
(Looks at letter) seems legit.
huh well that was quick and sudden. sounds nifty i'll keep an eye one this
YAY! FOX KISSES!!!
I like it so far
Statement: BEST F#CKING LINE EVER!
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Why am I a god?
Because I’m 2,987,453 and I don’t give a shit!
So first you kiss a fox and then you become a God, not a bad way to start your day if I say so myself.
Not sure if it was deliberate or not, but to my understanding the whole 'day like any other' refers to your own experience. So if someone has a habit of going to the library and they decide to do that then it'd be like any other day. In the case of talking of other people, it would be starting the day like anyone/everyone else.
So... Didnt get to the bookstore. I find it pretty funny that the example I used was a library.
And I faintly recall something about kitsune changing colors from red with acquiring their tails. Do remember they carry a little orb thats like their soul or mana core or something like that. Though, I suppose not many really go by the legends word for word in books, theatre, and games.
(decided ill reread this story cause it is that good)
WHAT A GREAT WAY TO DIE :D
Drinks taken from sake bottle:
1 swig
(only counting drinks from the ever filling bottle)
Did that fox give me ifenent alcohol, starts to dump it in my mouth because to dump it on the ground is a insult. After an hour I stop before I fall on my ass an shout all is forgiven to the sky. That fox did not have to kiss me, just show me this glass and I would have jumped through that portal no question asked
Seems like a lot of power to just dump on a guy. Generally, good power fantasy stories have the mc work up to that sort of thing. I'm also pretty sure kitsunes are supposed to gain tails from accomplishing things, so it probably would have been better to start off with just one or two tails. It seems pretty gary stu-ish to me right now.