After death, Sketch comes to into a world that he thought was nothing more than just fiction.
The night embraced Ponyville in a gentle embrace,
Using embrace twice is kinda redundant, it would probably work better as "The night held Ponyville in a gentle embrace"
Man, I should be sleeping but I saw these chapters get published and instantly started reading!
Cute so far, keep it up.
11671272I seriously dunno how I missed that. Thanks! ^^;
.....why do I think Luna is trying to get another alicorn from her dialogue here? (In the sense of let's see if this one can reach their full potential kinda way not a chess master type of way)
Using embrace twice is kinda redundant, it would probably work better as "The night held Ponyville in a gentle embrace"
Man, I should be sleeping but I saw these chapters get published and instantly started reading!
Cute so far, keep it up.
11671272
I seriously dunno how I missed that. Thanks! ^^;
.....why do I think Luna is trying to get another alicorn from her dialogue here? (In the sense of let's see if this one can reach their full potential kinda way not a chess master type of way)