Love the writing and story so far, chapters could do with a bit more substance to move the story along or show us more of the character/world you are trying to create though, like isn’t he an artist? Why didn’t he use his day off to draw what he was seeing of the snow in one of the previous chapters or of rainbow dash, etc. also you brought his human tech with him in the early chapters so don’t forget about him using it to journal and such :)
Love the writing and story so far, chapters could do with a bit more substance to move the story along or show us more of the character/world you are trying to create though, like isn’t he an artist?
Why didn’t he use his day off to draw what he was seeing of the snow in one of the previous chapters or of rainbow dash, etc. also you brought his human tech with him in the early chapters so don’t forget about him using it to journal and such :)
Into my library you go!