You use the term "I would" an awful lot, and it tends to get fairly repetitive; might want to look into changing that.
In other news: I'm super excited to see this got an update, I've been waiting to see what comes of Sketchy's experiences in Equestria for quite some time now!
Also, I get the feeling he may be unconscious in a hospital, and this is all a coma-based fever-dream.
You use the term "I would" an awful lot, and it tends to get fairly repetitive; might want to look into changing that.
In other news: I'm super excited to see this got an update, I've been waiting to see what comes of Sketchy's experiences in Equestria for quite some time now!
Also, I get the feeling he may be unconscious in a hospital, and this is all a coma-based fever-dream.
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Yeah, I agree. I need to fix that when I go back to try and fix it up later.
Love it great work
this story seems really good :)