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SketchBPegasus
Amateur writer and artist, hoping to improve!
SketchBPegasus
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Awesome!
hmm like to see where this goes going to keep an eye on it
The icon is cute
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Thank you. ^^
Lets keep an eye on Thor one... 😉
After reading it I have concluded you need a editor and give him some flaws because while this has potential it will get boring (to me at least) if sketchy just has everything go his way outside the initial learning curve.
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I really really do. ^^; Though my friend said he’ll help me proofread the chapters when he can.
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I added to the comment
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Righto, and I understand completely. Sketchy does have some flaws which will be seen in the future that may or may not reflect certain human flaws he has.
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It would of been Nice to see more of his human self
I don't why, but whenever I read german, I automatically read it in the medic's voice.
I don't think that Timberwolves are not known for their intellect.
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It has always been the medic
Finally managed to get to read this story, so far it's cute I hope you will continue it again soon.
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Thanks and I am, well sorta. Just had a bit of trouble with the next chapter, which has gone through so many revisions.
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My advice to that is the same as doing art, inspiration comes while actually writing, waiting on inspiration to come to you doesn't help. The stress and/or blank you feel is just the stress penalizing your brain, just keep writing, writing ANYTHING, and your brain will calm down on it's own and imagination will start flowing to you again after a 10-15minutes. Good luck on your writing
You use the term "I would" an awful lot, and it tends to get fairly repetitive; might want to look into changing that.
In other news: I'm super excited to see this got an update, I've been waiting to see what comes of Sketchy's experiences in Equestria for quite some time now!
Also, I get the feeling he may be unconscious in a hospital, and this is all a coma-based fever-dream.
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Yeah, I agree. I need to fix that when I go back to try and fix it up later.
Love it great work
this story seems really good :)
Good story so far, only down side is the short chapters and waiting lol.
Honking, really? Dear drivers if you can honk, you can step the brakes till they glow red, but nooo this can’t be, honk the obstacles away and if they aren’t fast enough? Oh well…
Seriously, I have seen this and it is heavily criticized by driving instructors, but them car folks don’t care…
Interesting so far, I wonder if he will do more then play tourist in Ponyville, and have goa and plot to the story. I take it he is currently just situating himself in his new surroundings.
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Actually basically, yeah. Just a few more of that before we get to some situations he gets into. Some mystery to unfold and such.
Hello again, I'm glad you've continued writing, and I see your writing has improved significantly as well!
I love that this entire chapter was a build-up to a bad pun.
I'm not a big fan of smaller chapters myself, but I'd also rather have smaller chapters than no chapters, so oh well!
I'm eagerly looking forward to more of Sketchy's Adventures!
Using embrace twice is kinda redundant, it would probably work better as "The night held Ponyville in a gentle embrace"
Man, I should be sleeping but I saw these chapters get published and instantly started reading!
Cute so far, keep it up.
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I seriously dunno how I missed that. Thanks! ^^;
Love the writing and story so far, chapters could do with a bit more substance to move the story along or show us more of the character/world you are trying to create though, like isn’t he an artist?
Why didn’t he use his day off to draw what he was seeing of the snow in one of the previous chapters or of rainbow dash, etc. also you brought his human tech with him in the early chapters so don’t forget about him using it to journal and such :)
Into my library you go!
great start into a story!!!
I read this forever ago and I'm glad it is updating again.
Thanks for the update!
.....why do I think Luna is trying to get another alicorn from her dialogue here? (In the sense of let's see if this one can reach their full potential kinda way not a chess master type of way)
Oooh interesting. Personally hoping the truth comes out during the dream merger or something.
Mwahaha you've fallen for my evil plan I knew that if I waited long enough you'd come back to make a new chapter, and now that you've returned I'll sing you praises till you'd be too guilty to ever leave again.
Mwahahahahha
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Well, your plan worked and I fell into your trap. I hope you enjoy the few chapters that will be coming up soon! I'll try to keep them as interesting and exciting as they can be.
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Of course my plan worked dear author, also *ahem*
I loved this chapter, I loved that you wrote this chapter, I loved that you released so soon after the last update, and I love looking forward to all your future updates
It is an interesting story, I thought Sketchy was an Earth Pony and not a Pegasus from the first couple of chapters.
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Nice. Looking forward to it. Wondering how he's going to affect things and whatnot.
Hope you continue this! I'm really enjoying it ^^