Now they need to update the Heart so you more lust it Absorbs the more it's field of effect will grow and the more who fell Lust in the field will send some of it to the Heart (and Devoted Worship to Tamati)
Kind of ironic that it was Spike, who was worshipped as a hero by the Crystal Ponies, who helped Tamati conquering it.
It’s amazing how much this story has improved since the start. The whole battle for the Crystal Empire was well-written. In a bad fic Tamati would’ve just steamrolled the whole Empire thanks to Villain Sue plot powers. It this story there was a battle and a real struggle, which is far more interesting.😀
It’s also nice that you gave him, his concubines and the Draggling children so much personality over the course of the last few chapters. I really appreciate well-written characters. Which makes me a bit sad that Cadence and Shining’s personalities were just erased. Corrupting characters by slightly altering their morality and perception is far funnier to me. But to each their own.
Also Nat… You’re going to take care of an Alicorn baby, who when she gets upset, can shot lasers from her horn, levitate multiple objects thrice her size and can teleport spam like nopony else. And she’s going to be very upset when some strange creatures trying to grab her and she can’t find her mommy or her mommy doesn’t recognizing her. So have fun! 😅
Finally there’s something I can’t help but have to point out: There are children in the Crystal Empire. Little foals and probably even babies. Who were either affected by the orgy spells themselves or watched everyone else including their family members participating in a huge orgy.
A lot of MC stories about villains conquering Equestria and turning the Main characters into their sex toys tend to ignore the existence of children. Which is perfectly understandable. This is supposed to be a guilty pleasure for people like me who love MC. So unless you’re into such things you want to blend out the darker implications of such stories.
Usually I do, too. But that’s the curse of a well-written MC story. Suddenly I’m invested into the world and the characters and then it’s hard to ignore these kind of things. Because I know there are children in the Crystal Empire and now I want to know what happened to them.
Anyways, this chapter was well wrote the wait. I’m hooked to this story and eagerly awaiting the next one. :)
I am in love with this dragon! I wish this dragon is in relife.
Now they need to update the Heart so you more lust it Absorbs the more it's field of effect will grow and the more who fell Lust in the field will send some of it to the Heart (and Devoted Worship to Tamati)
Kind of ironic that it was Spike, who was worshipped as a hero by the Crystal Ponies, who helped Tamati conquering it.
It’s amazing how much this story has improved since the start. The whole battle for the Crystal Empire was well-written. In a bad fic Tamati would’ve just steamrolled the whole Empire thanks to Villain Sue plot powers. It this story there was a battle and a real struggle, which is far more interesting.😀
It’s also nice that you gave him, his concubines and the Draggling children so much personality over the course of the last few chapters. I really appreciate well-written characters. Which makes me a bit sad that Cadence and Shining’s personalities were just erased. Corrupting characters by slightly altering their morality and perception is far funnier to me. But to each their own.
Also Nat… You’re going to take care of an Alicorn baby, who when she gets upset, can shot lasers from her horn, levitate multiple objects thrice her size and can teleport spam like nopony else. And she’s going to be very upset when some strange creatures trying to grab her and she can’t find her mommy or her mommy doesn’t recognizing her. So have fun! 😅
Finally there’s something I can’t help but have to point out: There are children in the Crystal Empire. Little foals and probably even babies. Who were either affected by the orgy spells themselves or watched everyone else including their family members participating in a huge orgy.
A lot of MC stories about villains conquering Equestria and turning the Main characters into their sex toys tend to ignore the existence of children. Which is perfectly understandable. This is supposed to be a guilty pleasure for people like me who love MC. So unless you’re into such things you want to blend out the darker implications of such stories.
Usually I do, too. But that’s the curse of a well-written MC story. Suddenly I’m invested into the world and the characters and then it’s hard to ignore these kind of things. Because I know there are children in the Crystal Empire and now I want to know what happened to them.
Anyways, this chapter was well wrote the wait. I’m hooked to this story and eagerly awaiting the next one. :)