I wonder if Celestia and Twilight friends could share Twilight view? Let's say Pinkie ask the innocent question of "Where is Spike" or "Can we visit him?" and maybe the rumor of the "illegal for ponies tracking spell" escape.
9394945 Well, this is a different Equestria with Changelings never turning good and dragons still considered scary, dangerous beasts. Twilight’s friends might be concerned for Spike, seeing how Pinkie has been, but who knows about Celestia, if what Spike has learned about why he’s there is actually true.
I never realize that I would have a soft-spot for Tamati, being a dad sure changes things. You could have probably split these chapters into mini parts, especially since it went in detail with Tamati's kids. Favorite Draglins is Media! She is a support Soldier! She buffs the Draglins.
Wow, Twilight you are becoming what you have set to destroy! I gotta say I didn't expect that from Pinkie, but I am intrigued by her actions it seems that she is more open-minded than Twilight, and maybe it means that there are others who might help or join Spike, and it makes me wonder if Fluttershy would join Spike since she is the element of kindness.
9395665 I do like the contrast of how Tamati is gaining a love and appreciation for a family while at the sane time Spike is losing his own sense of that and becoming more beastly.
And Twilight best be careful. The more she’s trying to control the situation the more she’s losing control of it altogether. Maybe a chat session with her friends will help her to get a better grasp of hiw she should proceed.
9395692 I didn't realize about this until later. Since this is adding to my previous comment. TT, RR, AJ, RD, PP, FS are the elements of Harmony, which they represented the elements of Magic, Generosity, Honesty, Loyalty, Laughter, and Kindness. Wouldn't Twilight's experiment on Spike cause a rift between her friends if they were not aware of it? In which it would give Tamati the best advantage when invading as they will be fighting themselves.
9395774 Very true. It was Tamati who first planted the idea in Spike’s head at the start and he’s just casually allowed things to progress with minimal interference on his part. Could he have planned this far ahead?
I wonder if Celestia and Twilight friends could share Twilight view? Let's say Pinkie ask the innocent question of "Where is Spike" or "Can we visit him?" and maybe the rumor of the "illegal for ponies tracking spell" escape.
9394945
Well, this is a different Equestria with Changelings never turning good and dragons still considered scary, dangerous beasts. Twilight’s friends might be concerned for Spike, seeing how Pinkie has been, but who knows about Celestia, if what Spike has learned about why he’s there is actually true.
I never realize that I would have a soft-spot for Tamati, being a dad sure changes things. You could have probably split these chapters into mini parts, especially since it went in detail with Tamati's kids.
Favorite Draglins is Media! She is a support Soldier! She buffs the Draglins.
Wow, Twilight you are becoming what you have set to destroy!
I gotta say I didn't expect that from Pinkie, but I am intrigued by her actions it seems that she is more open-minded than Twilight, and maybe it means that there are others who might help or join Spike, and it makes me wonder if Fluttershy would join Spike since she is the element of kindness.
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I do like the contrast of how Tamati is gaining a love and appreciation for a family while at the sane time Spike is losing his own sense of that and becoming more beastly.
And Twilight best be careful. The more she’s trying to control the situation the more she’s losing control of it altogether. Maybe a chat session with her friends will help her to get a better grasp of hiw she should proceed.
9395692
I didn't realize about this until later.
Since this is adding to my previous comment. TT, RR, AJ, RD, PP, FS are the elements of Harmony, which they represented the elements of Magic, Generosity, Honesty, Loyalty, Laughter, and Kindness. Wouldn't Twilight's experiment on Spike cause a rift between her friends if they were not aware of it? In which it would give Tamati the best advantage when invading as they will be fighting themselves.
9395774
Very true. It was Tamati who first planted the idea in Spike’s head at the start and he’s just casually allowed things to progress with minimal interference on his part. Could he have planned this far ahead?