10166632 It wasn't a problem for me actually, it's just catch me off guard, and your story was E Rated before so I'm just reminding you that something a bit gory is categorize as M rated story. Keep up the good work
Standing the stallion picked up the stained blood stained hoodie from the floor and walked out the ally and into the bustling night of the city. The bodies left behind were mangled with missing organs and body parts.
The other filly couldn’t contain her laughter and fell over laughing she started to couch due to over laughing. Calming herself down, she looked up at me with watery eyes and a wide smile.
“Why not, many citizens probably think she got a nice flan as well,” I laughed ducking into another room “besides, who else is gonna tease sunbutt princess.”
Not sure if this one was on purpose but you said flan i think you meant flank
That's......a bit gory, maybe you should change the story rating to M?
10166501
Honestly never crossed my mind, well you can look away now sorry for ruining your reading pleasure
10165570
No, could you send me a copy of wherever you write your stories so I can do some editing? I wouldn’t mind doing so
10166632
It wasn't a problem for me actually, it's just catch me off guard, and your story was E Rated before so I'm just reminding you that something a bit gory is categorize as M rated story. Keep up the good work
10166877
Thank you very much
stained two times?
I think you mean cough not couch
Probs ment cider not cinder
Probably meant what's with the white sized snack not.whats white the bite sized snack
Had not hand
Not sure if this one was on purpose but you said flan i think you meant flank