10157203 Your story is interesting and funny, a bit of typo here and there, but it's a good story. Waiting for the next chapter, keep up the good work!
10157732 It feels like it was written with speech-to-text (what I use when writing stories). Perhaps running it through a program like Grammarly as a machine editor would help (What I do)? Most of the mistakes I found are misused words with one letter difference.
IT'S ALIVE!!!!!!!!
10157093
Damn was it missed that much
10157203
Your story is interesting and funny, a bit of typo here and there, but it's a good story. Waiting for the next chapter, keep up the good work!
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I think it's the difference in dialect, I am from the Caribbean so it's absolutely more broken than what you're used to
10157732
It feels like it was written with speech-to-text (what I use when writing stories). Perhaps running it through a program like Grammarly as a machine editor would help (What I do)? Most of the mistakes I found are misused words with one letter difference.
Examples:
sin = sun
ton = town
Know = now
etc...