I'm awake, and I don't feel like I should be. That's not going to stop me from finding out why I'm here, why I'm awake, or why these strange creatures seem to fear me so much. I'm one of them after all, why should they fear a fellow equine?
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The cake is a lie that's what.
One way to keep readers coming back for more is cliffhangers, so you don't need to apologise for it.
Great work
Strange choice of word here. Instead of 'not equine' but 'entirely equine' ... as in 'part-equine and something else'?
Can't wait for the Death Goddess to meet the Bug Queen and the Chaos God.
I'm terribly confused at what's going on
Hmm, I wonder if Dashie is going to be some mix of the two dimensions. Or perhaps the child of one being that was in tune with the black dimension.
death to all !!!!!!!!!!
Eldritch horror, sweeping mysteries, and NONE of it bogged down by all the canon in mlp, and you know how to make a sequence involving time manipulation very interesting and thought out. This is by far one of the best stories i have read in a LONG time, keep up the good work.
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If there was going to be a pony who wasn't entirely equine from the start, I was sure it would have been Pinkie Pie. I'm convinced she's a descendant of Discord.
If RD is not entirely pony, I do have to wonder what her other heritage is...
and what the heck was in the sludge bucket from earlier?
this is just all kinds of fun
This certainly explains how Fluttershy notices Twilight's condition when they first met
Rainbow: “Yes I’ve always been part shoggoth, I’m totally awesome like that!”
Ah yes. Rainbow Dash. Neither from the White nor Black Dimensions, but instead from the Grey Zone. [Insert Awful Hospital joke here.]
my little cthulu just keeps getting more and more interesting. i can't wait to see how this develops. Especially with apparently hybrid dash.
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Sooo... might be a dumb question, but... what happened with the pickup in this and the previous chapter?
Several scenes worth of events appear to be missing, ShoggothTwi is unconscious at the end of Chapter VIII and with no clue what has happened, Rarity and the Servant agree that telling her that is not in her best interests, but if she straight-up asks they have to. Pinkie thinks about genuine smiles, fade to black, and apparently Twilight has woken up, immediately asked the right question and has received the explanation, with an unknown amount of time having passed.
Then, at the end of that chapter, ServantSpike appears (via the Eldritch teleport) along with Fluttershy and AJ who are conscious and terrified, meaning they've realized something's very wrong/seen something they shouldn't have (and if they hadn't yet the teleport has done that for them.) Fade to black again. Suddenly Spike is asleep (or has left again, or is otherwise incapacitated/unavailable), the aforementioned two are unconscious/mindwiped by Spikevant, Twigoth is rapidly acclimatizing to her new existence and goals (not eager to but fully willing to go against Celestia), and has sent Patients One through Three back to the hospital to keep up appearances.
Honestly not sure whether it's a stylistic choice to emphasize the Lovecraftian mystery and surreality, with the accompanying warping of space and time maybe also playing a role; simply being economical with what is shown (since the context does give at least a rough picture of what happened regardless) in order to move past the 'boring', repetitively expositional, unnecessary, or spoilery bits to get to the meat of the story; or if those scenes were genuinely misplaced/lost on the cutting room floor by accident.
"Twilight, this is an intervention! You need to stop breaking ponies necks!"
"I don't know what your talking about!" *Snaps Rarity's neck*
"Twilight?" *zooms out showing twilight hooves on Pinkies head* "Twilight!" *Snaps Pinkies neck*
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What's this? An asdf movie reference in 2019?!
[Insert clap here]
This story really should be renamed to "The Cliffhanger Life is Magic"