Fred Justice was just another junior student at Canterlot High helping out Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Rarity until things started to go crazy. Sunset Shimmer, Twilight Sparkle, and questions about his very origin come up.
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Am I a monster for wanting to punch Granny Smith in the face?
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No, your not
Hey Mr. Wildwpony, let me just say that this story along with your "Ninetails in Equstria" stories are 3 (I say 3 because of the Ninetails sequel) of the best stories that I've ever had the pleasure of reading since I found this website. You are a genius with the story writing for these stories you've created. By the way, if you ever decide for Luna to have a child with Emmit in your Ninetails fatherhood story, have you thought of Luna's pony/fox hybrid to look like the Alolan Ninetails from Pokemon Sun and Moon? I ask because Emmit is a regular Ninetails and his daughter with Celestia most likely will Excell in fire based magic like her mother, if that is what you were intending to be the case. Also, I ask because Luna's astronomical body is the moon, the opposite of Celestia's. The Alolan Ninetails is an ice and fairy types and it's pre-evolution, the Alolan Vulpix is one of the cutest Pokemon I have ever seen. I also wish to say that the Luna having a baby thing is just a question and a suggestion. Good luck with your future endeavors and stay safe. I HOPE to see more great chapters and maybe other great stories in the future!!
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I'm humbled by your praise, thank you very much. I opted to write fan-fiction in order to help my writing in general because I'm also working on a regular fictional story. I'm happy that you are enjoying my stories and telling me so strengthens my resolve that I'm headed in the right direction to becoming a good writer. I'm still working on showing the story and not telling the story.
As for your suggestion regarding if Luna has a foal, that's not a bad idea actually. It would fit perfectly in the story. However, I don't plan on making another sequel to Ninetales after Fatherhood. Plus, after initially getting done with A Lost Heir I plan on writing a few chapters with Fred back in the Equestria Girls universe during the EG second movie then that will be it for A Lost Heir too. After that, I'm just not sure. Hopefully, after that, I'll be close to finishing my fiction story so I could focus on publishing that one with the writing techniques I've developed here.
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Ok. Well, I wasn't suggesting to make another sequel to Fatherhood. I was asking if you were planning on having Luna to have a foal or not and the her foal be like an Alolan Ninetails.
Are you going to finish this story
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Oh yes, I'll finish it. I never want to leave a story unfinished. And thanks for reading.
Just found this fan-fiction and I am at 5 chapters in and Its great i can't wait to read more and i hope this continues until eventual completion. I like the magic aspect and the explanation as to why he can do magic in the human world. I am Excited to see whats going to happen.
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Thank you and I'm happy that you're enjoying it. I'm an inspiring writer, so I'm using fan fiction to iron out my writing style. A Lost Heir is almost done, just a few more chapters to go.
Seems like a small civil war is coming.