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Man, this was a long, long chapter! It felt a little bit too long to read in one sitting but I did it anyway!
I really like Crate and Angel together. They feel like they’d be great substitute parents for Fear! I was SO happy when I found out that their deaths were a dream of Fear, which is what I had hoped.
I hope they make it in the end, that they won’t be killed since I can imagine Fear returning to them at the end of this story.
I really liked the homey feel of this chapter too! There was some good growth for Fear and I could imagine everything going on thanks to your vivid descriptions!
Looking forward to reading the next one now!
If you ever need to take a break in between chapters just click on the paragraph you leave off on and select bookmark. :) It took me awhile before I started separating longass chapters like this one into two.
Yeah I thought they'd make great substitute parents for him too. :) Thank you for the compliments, I am sure you'll like the end of this story and the end of the sequel! <3