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The song, Wanderer’s Lullaby, was described in a really well done manner. As I read it, it was like seeing into Fear’s mind very clearly.
Furthermore, I also really liked Sim’s explanation of Fear’s Magic, the one being like raging water, the Changeling’s being like a blast of concentrated, hot steam.
The dream with Neur was pretty interesting. I kept imagining him with a tiny top hat, a monocle and clip-on tie.
The chapter seemed all over the place though, starting with a simple song, then a lesson, then Amelio’s dream with Neur and then Amelio rescuing Fear in his own dream.
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Wow! Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it a lot. I was never really sure if people liked the Wanderer's Lullaby inclusion as well as the explanation I gave for magic. I felt really inspired when I used that.
And do it. Imagine Neur that way. I encourage you. <3
It's one of the chapters I regret tbh. I feel like I could've done it better but it had a lot of important plot/development points I needed to hit and I had no idea how else to get them across. :P
Thank you Friendo!