8917356
Have you reached a decision yet?

Wow what was that.

8919591
Yeh, sadly I wont put in LOTR characters, however, it isnt going to take away from the story.

8919733
wut was wut?

8919983
from that chapterr

Yeah, Jurassic Park. What do I win?

Yup i got the reference and this is a very good story you are making

Now, that we have a threat I can think of many scenarios where is this going.

Either we will see our new Lord of The Rings save the adorable CMC, gaining favors later when he meets the ponies.

Or we will see total destruction of the forest by accidently misusing the power it gives him. Later receiving status of a potential threat by Celestia because everything that destroyed something is immediately a threat you need to turn into stone or just banish to Tartarus.

8920086
A free INTERNET COOKIE!

8920009
Your gonna have to be more specific, or throw me some context.

8923964
I don’t, maybe LOTR characters I think.

8923977
well, to put it simply, My basic premise is that your average Joe finds himself in equestria(which is Middle Earth after a hellava lot of years) and he's lived a life of seclusion and hermitage in the everfree forest for millennia. Thats just about it for now, Im starting work on the next chapter.

"Clever girl..." mutters Applebloom.

Jurassic park reference to what Owen says to blue the velocraptor

"Clever girl..." mutters Applebloom.

It's also from the first movie.

I know your a long way into this story but I just thought I would leave some quick feedback, in the prologue the woman said Ponyville was near by but in this chapter the mc is talking about having been in the forest for several thousand years and Equestria only being about one thousand years old it self means Ponyville can’t have been there when he first arrived, so yeah I know it’s kind of nit picking and not a huge problem but it did confuse me for a minute so I thought I would mention it.

Other then that I’m liking it so far and am looking forward to seeing where the story goes.

Yes i did actually, i remember that from the movie

Well dang, that’s a hefty time skip right there. I must admit, from the prologue I was hoping this would be a pre-unification story. It’s always nice to see stories on this site go in fantastical ways.

The pace is fast, very much so. It certainly doesn’t help that this is using a common cliche of the CMC getting caught in the forest by timberwolves or other such creatures.

I’d also like to note that the reference you put into this chapter was poorly done. AB has no reason to say that, the Timberwolf did nothing to warrant it, and she wouldn’t say that even if it did. Gotta be careful with those references.

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Robert Muldoon

"Clever girl..." mutters Applebloom.

Informative: This Unit got that reference!

"Clever girl..." mutters Applebloom

nice jarrasic park reference