so far so good~

Oh Hell yeah! I never thought my story would inspire someone, you have my support.

Sauron wasn't the greatest warrior, he was like Saruman a great speaker and his words alone are powerful enough to twist the minds of weaker creatures than him. Sauron's goal was to dominate, he wanted to dominate all living things and he poured his will to dominate into the one Ring. Together with his malice and evil etc. etc. By "corrupting" the rings made by Celebrimbor (Basically having contact with the rings) he connected them to himself and by forging the one ring he could thru it command those ring that the elves wore. Sauron came from the Vala Aule (God, archangelic like being) and knew his lore of craftmanship.

Sauron can manipulate energy, he is able to control weather, he can pick up objects with telekinesis, he can manipulate elements like light, darkness, shadow, fire, earth, wind, water. By using his skills and knowledge how to manipulate fire and weather, he clouded the skies of Gondor with the help of Mounts Dooms ash.

Sauron, was a mage, he was a master sorcerer, he was called the necromancer meaning he could send spirits like the Witch King. Sauron could communicate with the unbodied and he made them his servants, basically he controlled ghosts. Of course how exactly Sauron's powers look like or what shape they take is all up to your imagination. It can be green, it can be orange and yellow (like I choose to do) you can choose blackness and maybe something similar to space manipulation effects.

I recommend go and use the superpower wiki, they have nice descriptions of powers, beings like him can poses, remember not to go overboard. Of course you need to see the difference between power and knowledge, in this case your character has only power and doesn't know how to forge great weapons.

I hope this will help!

What lord of the rings character are on this story ?

Wow, this story is already better then Sauron's Second Chance

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Well, Im not entirely sure yet, Im willing to go the way of "LOTR Character in equestria" or Im going to try a story where the MC is just a regular guy that was given the one ring. Im up for suggestions.

A good setup for the next chapter.

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I was just asking if Frodo and his friends will be here. Because He’s my favorite character. And the other guy you send that will bear the ring or something?

I am going to say this here and now, you have a good set-up... Don't muck it up!

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Well, the being we already saw was likely one of the Valar. And now I am wondering what kind of being Discord is. Maybe one of the Maiar? And I would bet that good old Star Swirl is/was likely also one. :D

So...in a sense, this is a "Sauron displaced" only its someone whose gotten displaced and inherited the powers of Sauron. Not become Sauron, himself.

Also, i’d have probably asked her if my spirit is connected to the ring like Sauron’s, but I guess it being connected to him pretty much answers that.

hmm, very interesting

Se lo tomo bastante bien considerando la situación

Für den kaiser!

Wohoh! Exposition dump in the prologue! I like the looks of this story, but an exposition dump and with how... abrupt and grammatically incorrect some parts of this prologue are, I can’t help but be skeptical of the quality.

I’m afraid I can’t provide any helpful quotes and corrections as I’m on my iPad, and it tends to be rather frustrating to quote, edit, and type long comments on such a device. Especially in bed.

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I have trouble beginning stories.

Whilst flowery script such as this is a welcome sight to me, I will say that others would consider it too wordy. I recommend keeping that in mind in future stories.

As for why being too wordy is a problem, sometimes when such a thing occurs in a story, it can make it feel like the writer is taking a fake or sarcastic tone. There are other reasons, yes, but that is one that comes to mind for me.