"Deparav avhiuk foreukav, avhiuk iuk noav ij fighav lat saib accompliukh!

You made that up or is this from a website? If yes then I'd be happy to have the Link.

Nice progress, so we are going with the saving CMC strategy to gain favors and become "friends" with the mane 6.

Personally I would make his voice more scary, but its still good!

PS. FIRST

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To answer your questions, that was the Black Speech of mordor, I used a translator. Heres the link: https://lingojam.com/BlackSpeechTranslator

Also I set it up in the first chapters that our MC is a hermit, whos been living isolated in the Everfree for god knows how many millennia(1000 years) and this is the first time he's directly interacted with ponies since....well when he first arrived millennia ago. Not to reveal much but lets just say He's seen Celestia and Luna when they were foals. He values his privacy, but isnt above helping those in need. But I dont think he expects to be friends with ponies.

And furthermore: The only reason why I didn't make his voice so scary is that this is him when he's trying to be pleasant and persuasive. His voice is tempered and controlled, trying to persuade more than intimidate. However, you havent seen him get angry yet....

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He? Who’s he?

I enjoyed the chapter, keep it up.

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I'll introduce him later, for now Im keeping his identity as vague as possible.

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ok

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The only reason why I didn't make his voice so scary is that this is him when he's trying to be pleasant and persuasive. His voice is tempered and controlled, trying to persuade more than intimidate.

Sauron was the same way apparently, at least when he wasn't looking all armored up and sinister. Remember, one of his most well-known titles was "Sauron the Deceiver", and his fair form was beautiful/disarming enough to fool even the most perceptive of the elves of old, prior to his true nature becoming common knowledge.

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K, thanks for the info.

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Just to establish things right now: This is not Sauron. So while you are correct in your thoughts about his voice, the MC himself is not the Dark Lord.

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I'm aware of that, I was merely pointing out a similarity. After all, it makes sense that he'd gain at least some of Sauron's traits/abilities, seeing as he's technically the new Lord of the Rings, and the ring apparently contains/contained the majority of Sauron's soul (I'm not sure if it does anymore after being melted down and remade, but at the very least it should have left an impression after all that time). But hey, just because Sauron used said traits to deceive people, that doesn't mean his successor will choose to do the same.

Mary Poppins

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noice.

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Yeah caught it too and then immediately started to sing it in my head