Rainbow Dash rents out an luxury resort to take you on a week long getaway; the only thing she asks for in return is a little help with estrus. Not even Celestia herself could crash this party...or so you thought.
My only almost complaint believe it or not is the near occasional tease of Anons work in your story.
The romance plus clop is great even and I don't want to see less of that... But I still feel like there could be more shown of the work at the ERD. It feels like you are doing that intentionally though. Which is understandable given the focus of the prior story.
It just feels like an itch in the back of my mind thinking he is essentially working in the Equestrian DARPA with a more benevolent Manhattan project-esque air to it. Maybe even with a hint of Bletchley park or something with the on the roof gang.
So again not a complaint just sharing my two bits.
It really is an excellent story so please keep it up!
8764879 If you're looking for some Windy on Anon action I'm sorry to say it won't be in this. 8764982 Definitely a human anon. 8766507 Interesting that you say that because I actually had DARPA in mind when writing it. I have quite a few ideas of projects he could realistically be a part of, but I've also gotten a lot of feedback saying that Anon's work is the more boring part of the fic, so I opted to keep it short. 8766703 I find your words hurtful sir and it's a shame you couldn't wait to post this until after I uploaded the next chapter because you'd see that your concern is explicitly addressed.
8766976 Awww... That's dissappointing to hear on my end. Oh well. I don't suppose a side story or two could possibly be a thing?
A bit demanding of me I know but I think alot could come of it. An inside view of a possibly not so cold war against threats to Equestria and even Dash could be involved for a personal angle? Heck, inbetween the other nations known that are threatening like the Changeling factions, and unknown ( The Storm nation especially or the Abyssinians could use some help recovering.) there is alot that could involve all characters.
Maybe even just as an arc showing a cross of their careers deepening their love. Meh. Not sure how that would work with the slice of life romance here unless it was a humanitarian mission or some minor operation.
But even if that doesn't happen at all you haven't lost a reader here.
I suppose I will just have to do with some slice of life romance and clop~.
8767029 I could see it happening at some point but I won't make any promises. 8768005 Next week sometime. I just want to stay ahead with writing so I don't go a month or two without updating.
Hoo, boy. This is gonna be a good one
Ow man this is going to be interesting story to read
Before I read, will there be clop with Windy Whistles in this?
Wait, a non human Anon?
8764982
Wha? No.. its a continuation of excuses. Anon is human.
You honestly surprised me with this sequel. Let's see if this does just as well as Excuses.
Nice. I am very happy to see this!
My only almost complaint believe it or not is the near occasional tease of Anons work in your story.
The romance plus clop is great even and I don't want to see less of that... But I still feel like there could be more shown of the work at the ERD. It feels like you are doing that intentionally though. Which is understandable given the focus of the prior story.
It just feels like an itch in the back of my mind thinking he is essentially working in the Equestrian DARPA with a more benevolent Manhattan project-esque air to it. Maybe even with a hint of Bletchley park or something with the on the roof gang.
So again not a complaint just sharing my two bits.
It really is an excellent story so please keep it up!
You know its a good story when you hit the like button before you even read the damn thing.
>Fic is set in winter
>cover art is in autumn
What kind of second rate hodgepodge is this mobius hmm? downvote :P
8764879
If you're looking for some Windy on Anon action I'm sorry to say it won't be in this.
8764982
Definitely a human anon.
8766507
Interesting that you say that because I actually had DARPA in mind when writing it. I have quite a few ideas of projects he could realistically be a part of, but I've also gotten a lot of feedback saying that Anon's work is the more boring part of the fic, so I opted to keep it short.
8766703
I find your words hurtful sir and it's a shame you couldn't wait to post this until after I uploaded the next chapter because you'd see that your concern is explicitly addressed.
8766976
Awww... That's dissappointing to hear on my end. Oh well. I don't suppose a side story or two could possibly be a thing?
A bit demanding of me I know but I think alot could come of it. An inside view of a possibly not so cold war against threats to Equestria and even Dash could be involved for a personal angle? Heck, inbetween the other nations known that are threatening like the Changeling factions, and unknown ( The Storm nation especially or the Abyssinians could use some help recovering.) there is alot that could involve all characters.
Maybe even just as an arc showing a cross of their careers deepening their love. Meh. Not sure how that would work with the slice of life romance here unless it was a humanitarian mission or some minor operation.
But even if that doesn't happen at all you haven't lost a reader here.
I suppose I will just have to do with some slice of life romance and clop~.
Soooooooo, i don't mean to be a bother, but when do we get a chapter 2?
8767029
I could see it happening at some point but I won't make any promises.
8768005
Next week sometime. I just want to stay ahead with writing so I don't go a month or two without updating.
8772947
Yay! I understand and more than good enough for me. Thank you!
YEEEEEEEEEEEEES