One thing I have to say is that the pacing is rather all over the place. That and some of the dialogue is recycled from another section. It makes reading it a confusing mess, at least to me. But the premise holds potential, even though I'm a bit confused over the massive amount of AnonXMasala lately on the site.

This chapter most likely will go through some revision before the story is complete, that's my prediction.

The owner of the restaurant gave you a pretty good paycheck, but half of that money was always used for groceries, the electric bill and the house rent, leaving you with about $350 or even $385. You’d be lucky to to have $510 if you ever had to cover for someone else or even work the night shift.

For the past hour, I've been trying to find out what exactly this dude makes monthly. Is he on salary? paycheck to paycheck? Commission? Does he get paid weekly or biweekly? He doesn't pay for the water bill or the gas bill? Where did these precise numbers come from?

I know this is nothing and I'm probably over thinking the subject, but I just wanna know if the homie chef boiardi is actually being paid fair or not. :/

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he is being paid fairly, but with the cost to keep a roof under his head, along with the cable and electric bill, as well as water maintanence and the amount of groceries he purchases, he's barely able to have a little spending money.

Great work keep up the good work and I do love India curry

Great start!

This character reminds me a bit of me, I love to Cook also, I also Watch some cooking program like MasterChef, Kitchen Nightmares and some Swedish cooking program. I love the story so far. Keep up the good work, my friend.

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After you're finished with this story I think you should make another story to chrysalis

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I've got 2 more chapters to post before I can call this story "Completed." As for Chrysalis, I've got other requests I need to fulfill before I can do another Chrysalis story

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But you are going to make a sequel to chrysalis right

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Yes, I am. It's just going to take a while before I reach it, so just be patient.

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I will just want to be sure

Really, this series is going to end? Aww... I have been loving it and for it to end so soon, aww.

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I never said I was ending the anthro waifu series.

She giggled, “Of course, I am. You must be new around here. My name’s Fleur De Lis.” she introduces herself. She walks over to you, with her daughter still holding her hand. “This lovely little young lady is my darling daughter, Graceful Charity.”

Her or my daughter is named after a YU-GI-OH card. I like it.

The girl gave a small wave before retreating behind her mother. You smiled, as you always had a soft spot for children. Graceful Charity has her mother’s long, silky pink hair, but shared some of her father’s features. Mostly the light tan color and brown eyes.

WAIT! has IsraelYabuki know that I love Fleur-de-lis and knows who I am?

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I know now

And how do you know I like YU-GI-OH?

And how do you know what I look like?

And how do you know I like Fleur-de-lis- Oh wait, alredy say that out loud, did i?

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Dude, I didn't know you like all those things, these ideas just pop into my head sometimes during the last minute.

The girl gave a small wave before retreating behind her mother. You smiled, as you always had a soft spot for children. Graceful Charity has her mother’s long, silky pink hair, but shared some of her father’s features. Mostly the light tan color and brown eyes.

Well Genius its eather you here me out loud on Me and Fleur's love Story or its your ideas (Just saying)

You seem to have a great appreciation for food as well do you cook?”

Saffron was quite perceptive. “Why, yes I AM.

This should be I do, not am. Just something I noticed.

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whoopsies, lol

Your mother was in prison for murdering another woman in cold blood when she found out she was sleeping with your dad..

Eh, seems reasonable.

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most definitely