Blue wanted to protest. It was better not to, though. He was tired anyways. "Alright. Goodnight, Fluttershy. Thanks for saving my life. I'll repay you any way I can." He closed his eyes. "Any way you want..."
Woo finally got around to reading this and I’m glad I did! This story has me hella hooked and I can’t wait till the next chapter I’m not very good at critique, but I will say that I love your writing style. It’s easy and enjoyable to read. All of the little survival tips and tricks are a nice edition (even though I probably won’t remember half of them -.-). And the romance! I swear I am a huge sucker for well-written romance and I love how it’s being handled in this story! It doesn’t feel too rushed or drug out imo.
I suppose my comment is long enough so I’ll leave it at that. Have a nice day Dandere
I'm so happy you're enjoying it so far. To be honest I was losing interest in this story due to lack of feedback but I think I'll keep writing it. Thanks for the kind words and confidence boost.
9085864 Well I’m glad I could help out in some way; made my day a little better (though I would respect your decision should you drop the story :/)
It’s stupid early, though, and I’ve been up all night so I’m gonna keep it at that and head off to bed
[im curious though have you added this story to a fair amount of groups? You could potentially get a lot of views/feedback/etc. that way (I’m not sure if there’s a way to see the groups the story is in and I’m too tired to attempt to find out)}
9089550 That’s a shame because it’s a wonderful story. I could always try to add it to some of the groups I’m in. (That is, if you don’t mind) I would try to start a thread in the self-promotion group, but I suck at summary so I doubt it would help much
Edit: Your profile page says that: "Am I the only one who follows someone if they have a have a cool profile pic like “yo your pic is awesome *follows;*"" I do the same thing LOL.
9089550 Perhaps you could recommend the fic to a YouTuber like Scribbler who makes audio recordings of fics. It would certainly attract the attention you're looking to achieve I agree with Meadow Feather.
I really appreciate the feedback! It makes me feel better about writing it, and now that more than one person has essentially said the same thing, I know I'm doing the story right, too. Thanks again, and I hope to keep you entertained!
Anyway she wants hm?
Also, holy hay that Amarok is scary!
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That's awesome! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.
Woo finally got around to reading this and I’m glad I did! This story has me hella hooked and I can’t wait till the next chapter I’m not very good at critique, but I will say that I love your writing style. It’s easy and enjoyable to read. All of the little survival tips and tricks are a nice edition (even though I probably won’t remember half of them -.-). And the romance! I swear I am a huge sucker for well-written romance and I love how it’s being handled in this story! It doesn’t feel too rushed or drug out imo.
I suppose my comment is long enough so I’ll leave it at that. Have a nice day Dandere
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I'm so happy you're enjoying it so far. To be honest I was losing interest in this story due to lack of feedback but I think I'll keep writing it. Thanks for the kind words and confidence boost.
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Well I’m glad I could help out in some way; made my day a little better (though I would respect your decision should you drop the story :/)
It’s stupid early, though, and I’ve been up all night so I’m gonna keep it at that and head off to bed
[im curious though have you added this story to a fair amount of groups? You could potentially get a lot of views/feedback/etc. that way (I’m not sure if there’s a way to see the groups the story is in and I’m too tired to attempt to find out)}
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I think I have it in all the groups I could post it in. Sadly it's just not the kind of story that garners a lot of attention.
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That’s a shame because it’s a wonderful story. I could always try to add it to some of the groups I’m in. (That is, if you don’t mind) I would try to start a thread in the self-promotion group, but I suck at summary so I doubt it would help much
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You can do those things only if you want to. I won't ask you or anyone to do such a nice thing.
Nice ART bruh! Oh, um...I don't have time to read the actual story yet LOL
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Yeah the art is pretty awesome! You should read it when you get the chance, it’s a great fic ^-^
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KK :3
Edit: Your profile page says that: "Am I the only one who follows someone if they have a have a cool profile pic like “yo your pic is awesome *follows;*"" I do the same thing LOL.
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lol glad to know I’m not the only one 😂
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Perhaps you could recommend the fic to a YouTuber like Scribbler who makes audio recordings of fics. It would certainly attract the attention you're looking to achieve
I agree with Meadow Feather.
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I really appreciate the feedback! It makes me feel better about writing it, and now that more than one person has essentially said the same thing, I know I'm doing the story right, too. Thanks again, and I hope to keep you entertained!