HMMMM is twi going to turn into this worlds version of a witcher, and im assuming the poison is slowly turning her into a head hunter but only when she is affected by negative thoughts

Holy Emperor... That was a bit of a twist!

Well what a little twat Owlowiscious turned out to be.

But I still love it.

Great chapter, always nice to see exposition,

I like this setting, it's very low fantasy and the technology varies from mid 1600's to mid 1900's (Electricity and running indoor plumbing with swords and horse drawn carriages). It is very unique yet with enough familiarity that it never seems, I don't know, I guess the best word would be alien(?). I know I haven't seen anything like this before. (unless you count Equestria from canon, but that's more 'let's through in this bit of technology for a gag' rather than deliberately have a weird mix-and-match of tech with a design choice in mind.)

Also, I am torn, on the one hand, faster updates are always desirable, but on the other hand, longer chapters are also always desirable too. A real 'eating your cake and having it too' dilemma. Do what ever your heart tells you, I will be happy either way.

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I actually tried to pull a lot from the 19th century in this story with smatterings of earlier ages here and there to better fit what kind of setting I wanted to make. You'll probably also see a bit of steampunk as the story progresses as well.

As for the chapter length, I'm gonna try to discipline myself and stick to long chapters.

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I'm using information that's not divulged until a later chapter. Don't read further if you don't want to be spoiled.
Those are the other spellblades then. Calling it know.

Damn mate this is story is amazing, like really amazing and so I can’t for the next chapter.
Thanks

Honestly all I can think of is that one clip from Nostalgia critic
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0M6WUeUWAEc

Sparkle Sparkle Sparkle

when can we expect the next chapter?

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I'm not sure at this point to be honest. I'm working on a lot of stories right now and this one's kind of been on the back burner. I just finished wished another story of mine so I'll try to make time for this one, but I admit it's also a matter of motivation as well. These chapters are extremely draining to write and I need to force myself to write them. Once I start writing though, it's easier to keep going... up to a point. So in short, I'm not abandoning the story, but I don't k ow when I'll finish the next episode as of right now.

I really hope this story continues, it has a very interesting concept that I hope gets expanded.

Just started this story, and I must say, 20k word chapters are an absolute delight! That being said, it's completely understandable if you just want to get them out at a faster rate. Also I'm intrigued in how Twilight's sword wielding adventure will play out.

"Still, others had some success and a few even gained some renown — though none had ever shown as brightly as Alrik.

shone

Rather than do any more fighting, he called out to all would-be monster hunters to come together and form one unified strength.

This doesn't sound quite right. Maybe "unify their strength"

"Don't worry, dear, I already washed the blanket and cleaned the couch.

Missing quotation mark.

I was going to research something before whatever happened to me. It stands to reason that whatever I had been doing most likely led me to my current situation, but I'm still missing too many pieces to put anything concrete together.

Bruh I bet she goes to meet with celestia and tells her about her idea and celestia like no I need everything done via harmony to maintain my dictatorship or something than boom banish twilight cause to smart idk

Why would he just trust a random stranger he just met with someone's private information?

He dosent trust her. He just dosent care enough.

"Who knows, girl," she continued, "you just might find some folk who'll watch your back no matter how bad things get for you. You just might find out what you're meant to do in this dangerous world we call Hestenia. Just keep your eyes, ears, and mind open."

Hestina
Equestria
Owl whatever it’s name is in both
tartarus in both
Some kind of alternate reality? Is it even real or a creation of something? Maybe she never left the void the void merely became the world after a time. Maybe it existed after the death of the previous world. So many theories running in my head now